Black Kiss Emotional Writing

So I want you guys to write a poem. A poem with at least 3 verses. I want it to be emotional too. It can be from me laughing so hard my neighbor can hear me or so heartfelt that im making a new Nile out of my tears. You'll get more points if you make it rhyme. You dont have too. Thats pretty much it. Lets get started

PRIZES: A golden medal,a gift,subscribe and a sign on your guestbook :D

Heres an example:

Seek Not My Heart
by Kit McCallum

Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?

Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.

No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.

All of your poems were amazing. Thanks so much for participating! It was really hard to choose since they were all so great. These 3 stood out and i also wanted to declare 2 others but sadly there can only be 3 winners. Again thanks so much for participating.

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The Last Time ~Akeni Chan
I wish it'd let me... ~SaxGirl
Unwanted ~Ejobes18
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