Senior Otaku++ | Posted 11/14/10 | Reply
I realized that I favorited this some time ago, but I keep forgetting to comment! D:
I really like your story, its easy to tell that the characters all have their own distinct personality, and their looks really speak a lot about them.
I can't wait to learn more about this world/story :]
Otakuite | Posted 10/08/10 | Reply
The story to Motherland has a nice structure and can really take someone in... kepp up the great work! I'm looking forward to the next pages!
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/28/10 | Reply
It's a great story! As a reader, I was able to follow things, and it was very easy to pick up on what you created in your world. I posted the link on my "dojo" page - if you want to take a look please feel free to do so. The website is linked in my world, 108 Stitches.
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/28/10 | Reply
Thanks so much! It's really an honor to have my work featured!
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/27/10 | Reply
Thanks! I've provided a link on my web site to here so that my readers can visit here and read your work, and mentioned that I thought it was a great way to start a story. I will also provide the same link my ezine when the September issue is released in the next few days.
You have some talent! Keep up the good work!
LOL, rocks are universal
Otakuite | Posted 09/26/10 | Reply
This is a very interesting story. I can't wait for the next page! :) You really thought it through (with the planets and names, I mean) which I really like. You are almost creating your own universe. Love it!
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/16/10 | Reply
Ah, thanks so much! If you'd like to use the comic in your tutorial, I'm sure it shouldn't be a problem. ;) Your comments are so nice - I really love to read them. Again, thanks for the appreciation!
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/10 | Reply
I should have also mentioned I like the art and the story line as well...I was actually in the middle of writing my first lesson in Art of Writing Manga and when I came across your comic and I thought: this is what I would use as an example of "The right way to do things"...
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/15/10 | Reply
Thank you very much! It's always nice to hear the opinions of the readers. I'm glad you like my comic so far!
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/15/10 | Reply
You know what I liked about this? The way you, as the author, don't spend any time telling us all about the future, but let your characters tell the story for you (very, very good!!). I also liked the way you made good use of panels - enough to tell us what is going on but didn't waste any on pointless things. Panel layout was well done, too. And you made good use of expressions for your characters.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more.
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/11/10 | Reply
Everything looks so tidy ^^ seems like a fun story too. Page 10 is my favourite so far, I want one of those whooshy-flying things XD
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
I love the emotion on his face on page 9!
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/10/10 | Reply
GOOD IDEA, AND GOOD LOOK
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/10/10 | Reply
>.< nice!! i normally don't like sci-fi, but i like this one! I really like the concept of the story, too!! i hope to see more soon!
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/23/10 | Reply
I'm liking it a lot. I love scifi and was sursrised to get as interested in just the intro as I was. I like the artwork style and use of color, I like to see things in color. Hope you'll see this through to the end.
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/22/10 | Reply
This is amazing so far!! Each panel is drawn beautifully and the color looks gorgeous for your comic style. I LOVE Laye's hairstyle and those two swords she has on the chapter title. Interesting story-line thus far, and I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work MGA! <3
DragonGirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/10/10 | Reply
And here it is! I've been waiting for this x3
I simply love the cover! It's so colorful and well compositioned and I just love the character designs - especially the one on the right -> what's his her name? And I love how you did the blue light and all those marking thingies. It really makes it look like the far future with lots of scientific stuff. Oh and I wonder what those creatures on the left are - those two with white and red and awesome black smoke :D
Ah well written! It gives a clear, quick introduction :3
Oh nice! I'm loving the background, her hair and her swords! :D
*turns more pages*
Man these panels look amazing. You put so much effort into each one. I'm loving the backgrounds and the character designs. Haha I wonder what the blond guy is like and what will happen.
Can't wait to see more ;D
Saskies (Otakuite++) | Posted 07/09/10 | Reply
Interesting concept and storyline, I can't wait to see more :)
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/24/10 | Reply
Lol yes, my anatomy skills fail. The arm length thing might be intentional in some cases since a certain human breed has longer arms, but it's probably just me any other time. >.<
Thanks for the comment (and the criticism, I really appreciate the help)!
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 06/24/10 | Reply
I just read up to the first 4 pages and I LOVE IT!!! I'm definately favoriting this and subscribing to you! I HAVE to read more!!
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/24/10 | Reply
Hah, yes, music belongs in the intro. XD Talk to Adam about maybe setting something up! :D That'd be awesome to be able to listen to music and read it! Or, make recordings of what's being said, like an audio book? XDDD
The coloring is well done. It certainly looks like you've put effort into it. My only concern is: work on your anatomy a little more. I've noticed a lot of the arms are either too long or too short. But, that's my only qualm. Keep up the good work~! (>_0)b
And, then... I met you.
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/21/10 | Reply
No you are not nuts( about the music thing) I have to admit I am listening to the song The Sun Rises from the Okami sound track.
Yes that one picture dose look kinda like a modivational poster.
Keep up the good work!
Weaver of Dreams (Otaku Angel) | Posted 06/21/10 | Reply
wow, such detail to the illustration for it so far, keep it up!
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/20/10 | Reply
Oh wow, I love this idea! I'm really into alien/other planet kind of things <3
And the first few pages look great so far! I can't wait for more :D
*hugs and favs