Wow! This is a very cute page! Looks like they're actually moving! Amazing!

YESSSSSS
The tower must be silenced!
Natalya's father, the Czar, yes? I love his moostache.

@Alchemic Mushroom:

OOOOOOH!! Good to know!

@izuzu15:

I mean the chapter is almost over, not Natalya's Petite Affairs!

Almost over?! No way!!!

So far it's great!!! Love the Father's hand in pg. 37!!!

This is great!!! Hope to see new pages added soon!!!! Although I know your busy with Valle Lacrimarum!!!

BTW I gotta say I love how you draw all of you backgrounds, all the towers and furniture!!! I tend to use a lot of Auto-cad blocks!!! And in future pages that I haven't posted I've been using tons of sketch-up blocks!I LOVE THEM!!! I feel guilty. Like I'm using short cuts and it's kinda wrong but at the same time I just love it! And it tends to looks so good!!!!! Way better than if I had done it myself. But I gotta say seeing the way you make your own from scratch is very inspiring!!!

Hahaha!! My mom says the same thing about the macaron and macaroon!!! That people have to learn the difference!!! I've never tried a macaron... I want to!! They look like little colorful burgers!!!

Hahaha!! pg 8 from chapter 3. You really hate ebay's "lolitas" don't you?!!! LOL!!! But I've seen things like that so many times!!!

I am so sorry Alchemic Mushroom-chan!!
I had no idea this has been going on for so long!!
If I had known about it, I would've read it a long time ago! T^T
it is super-cute right now...love the Lolita! :3
look foreward to reading the rest!! ~^-^~

Oh my gosh! Nikiford was the lad "out of his mind" so called by the fancy man on page 1 of Valle Lacrimarum!

I WAS SO DYING TO KNOW WHO IT WAS THANK YOU SO MUCH!! ;_;

That front cover is fantastic! I just love it!

Yup, your line art has gotten a lot more detailed. :D I think the detail adds to the atmosphere of the story. I'm interested to see what happens next! :)

@ponyochan:

thank you so much, that really means alot to me!

I love how Natalya's hair is inked on pg 20!

Ilarion is so blonde! (I mean his hair is...)

@izuzu15:

thanks, that means alot!

@Alchemic Mushroom:

Really? Well you don't make them look primitive!!! I love the patterns you use!!!

@izuzu15:

lol, actually they are the definition of primitive!

@Alchemic Mushroom:

Oooh! I've never heard of those programs before!!! But they must be really good!

@izuzu15:

Thank you! I use HP Image Zone and MS Paint

I have a lot to learn from your paneling and other stuff! Your art is very authentic and you have skills!!!! What program do you use?!

@C C C:

lol, thats cool :D

Oooh! I love Elodie's hair :3
I am officially and Emory fangirl... that doesn't overpower my fangirlism for Ilarion, though. GO ILARION!!

@Artgrrl:

it's a leap from her more innocent looks :D

Natalya looks cool with her stern eyes on page 18

@Mr Hentai:

Don't worry, she doesn't stay a doll forever. She's still Natalya either way, doll or not :D

@C C C:

we shall see if it works! XD

-scribbles down in her evil how-to-abduct-duchesses notebook-
Ring... bell.... capture duchess....
AHAHAHHA FOOL PROOF!

*falls over laughing* "Cesspool of simpletons." That is one of the best things I have heard in a long time.

-Cleavers

Yaay! More update's I love this !!

This is so adorable. Great job!

Lol not really, m not any better than u (in fact im worse -__-")
But i think u'v already gone as far as u can as an ametuer, i think u shud move on to the professional level. Think like a perfectionist! And as for the demonstration i cant, i dont have a scanner T^T And even if i did my drawing style is really different from urs so it wudnt help, u have to learn techniqes to improve ur style of drawing.

I love Emory :D
He's so cool<3

@moonlit dream:

I don't hate any of my characters but they don't have to like each other :D
Nikifor was just a character I use to vent through.

You may hate him, but Nikifor is my favorite. :U

@RinsRiddle:

Thanks for the con crit, you sound like a great artist! Perhaps you could show me what you mean with demonstation?

Really love the concept But u shud definetely try to improve ur art more i dont think u've found ur style yet. Ur really good at designing clothes and hair so ur focus shud be on improving the way u draw faces, i noticed when u take away the hair, a lot of ur charas look really similar to each other, u have to learn how to make them look unique. (sorry if i sounded mean, i really enjoyed ur work tho, keep it up!)

She looks more grown up in those cloths!, Which is a good thing XD!

@Alchemic Mushroom:

LOL!, Yeah there adorable! My cat stalks me (I'm not kidding she cries at my door for hours!) But they really get to you X3!

@Bluemoon Halo:

I have a cat too, she runs after people if they have food (she's really fat and spoiled) But she's my baby :P

Awwwwww!, that harp seal is so cute (love the name), it reminds me of my cat, VERY attached to it owner X3!

@C C C:

maybe she had an epiphany :P

Natalya looks more mature...

@Alchemic Mushroom:

Yeah you really took a complete turn from where the first story was!, But I love both stories and can't wait to see were you go with this new version X3!

@Bluemoon Halo:

thanks, Petite Affairs of Natalya was just a comedy to help develop my characters a little more. Monarchy X Anarchy isn't going to be very happy

The new stories more sad already but way more touching and beautiful! I love these kinds of stories!

@Mr Hentai:

thanks, i hope we're both successful in the future :)

@:

i kno right? :)

@Cooki Monstress:

those are cute ideas! i'll try to get a page done tonight

ummmz...

Sees a shooting star and demands one.
wants a puppy "Giant beastly dog"
umm Gives Allistair a kiss on the cheek and idk u pick the reaction.

You should do a short strip where shes all grown up and in love
She goes swimming.
Karaoke contest xD
Princess dress up?
is addicted to monster or other energy drinks..
fail on the ideas

@lovejenmoon:

thank you

@C C C:

He's quite dedicated to her

Sir Alistair is going to kill Justin Bieber... I love Alistair, his obsession is so cute!

wow this is so freaken funny! i love it!

@:

thanks! I'll get try to have your idea posted tonight or tommorrow

@C C C:

maybe one day
nah, i haven't written it yet! i don't think my characters or plot is developed enough yet to get started on the real thing so i'm just creating a sort of trial
when i do feel confident enough to create monarchy x anarchy, i'll post it as a seperate webcomic here

Wait... is MonarchyXAnarchy going to be a physical manga?

@:

I'll try them

Oh, Elodie TT_TT

Thank you for adding more pages they were so funny XD!

@:

Amazing! I'll start working on it those are great ideas!

@C C C:

I just realized she said "can I has a baby hippopotamus".

@elementalprincess:

You got it right!

@C C C:

Or maybe Natalya is abnormally strong during her week! XD

That's so sad... Alistair... is so weak.... Well, probably not. He was just shocked right? .... I hope so.

Died from menstruating XD! That's hilarious!

@:

Natalya gets turned into a doll but for about half of her primary story. For the sake of this comic I draw here as a regular girl

I love when you post updates. Your art style is really cute and I love reading this. Your characters are intriguing. Why do I sound like some old teacher? *shot* XD Anyways, keep up your awesome work!

Very nice comic! Thx for making the reading right to left and forsaying which way to read. Amazing artistry as well.

You draw the cutest seals!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@Alchemic Mushroom:

I already settled for "well its not lolita...but its a poofy dress" for my character XD but ill be sure to check those sites out!
thanks you, and youre welcome :)

@VivaLaParadise:

Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I do put alot of thought into my characters, I try to make them as unique as possible
There are websites that can help you understand lolita fashion; you should check out lolitafashion.org or hellolace.net, those places are great!

I love the whole story XD its so cute. the whole art is just lovely and i can tell that you put so much thought into each of the characters.
I admire the lolita fashion in your work. i attempted to make one of my characters wear lolita fashion, but i chickened out in the end XD im scared ill do something wrong lol.
anyway, keep up the great work!

haha i just read your story now its pretty interesting

@animegirl171:

thanks

@Mr Hentai:

why, thank you!

OH LOOK I AM HERE TO MAKE YOUR DAY BY COMMENTING!!
XD I love the fact that Natalya gets a seal from Alistair. It's kinda funny XD Very cute seal though~

I love your comic
It is really beautiful ,I can see that you put a lot of time into it
and its really funny too!
Please keep uploading,cant wait for more!

@Artgrrl:

I use ms paint :D

The baby seal is so cute! :D
I love the artwork
what program do you use?

Very accurate!
That kind of thing happens when you buy kimonos from ebay too!

this is so cute and funny!!! please add more!!

xD I love this! CONTINUE! <3 *hugs and favs*

Hooray! I finally got around to reading this! ^o^
You've done a really great job with it so far, I can't wait to read more!

I must say that I'm intrigued by Lachlan's artistic ability. lol

@:

thank you

@xlolfishx:

thank you, i take pride in my stick people :)

Those stick figures, they're just so... so... amazing! You could go professional with those!

@Alchemic Mushroom:

I sorry!

@C C C:

gosh golly! you guessed it!

(refering to pg 2 chapter 3) The plan isn't to sneak into her closet is it...?

@LemonsAndLimes:

there's a difference between 'nudity' and 'brief nudity', but if you can't handle that, then thats alright, you don't have to read it

wow. didn't see that coming... lol, nice job. lolita's are pretty. i saw a high school girl this morning with a sort of lolita look. i was like "omg, pretty!!!" well, i thought it.

@C C C:

i used to think i was, but now i don't believe i'm good enough to be called one

Wait... are you still christian? (Sorry for being so dumb- and sorry if I insult you in any way. I admit i am accused of being ditzy I really wish I could lolita, but it doesn't suit me... )
I do really love your art- it is gorgeousfully prettyful :D

Ur art is more than fabulous!!I love ur characters designs there are so pretty!the black haired guy is my fav...FREEDOM!! lol

Hahaha. I simply adore Natalya.
"I'm a lady!"
"NO, YOU ARE A PEASANT!"

OH, SO CUTE!!!! i really like it!!! the dresses for natalya are really adorable!!!!
heh heh heh heh heh... i really like the fact that they are wearing kilts here, too

Wow. I wish I could get that much for my birthday. I'll be lucky to get one skirt.

I love the shoes on page two. And the teapot pose is simply gorgeous! And changing the names? Personaly I wouldn't do it. It would confuse me too much.

So cute~! I'm a little teapot~

Awwwww~~ great chara design~~ your art rocks too! I love the lolita dress. :D

Looks good so far
I can't wait to read more!

Awesomeness!

I like the cover :3 I want to see what happens. Good luck on updating.