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Your elegance to me is overwhelming,
Chika watches as Michiru dance on the side of the river. Her steps were elegant, but held an amount sadness. He wanted to go to her, but something stopped him.
I would so much do anything for you.
Why aren't you looking at me? She danced and twirled, like a ballerina in a box. She didn't know that he was watching her from afar.
I would cry pools of tears if you and me would never be. I'd become numb and become a living statue.She cried. All she wanted was his love. but he liked someone ells. Or she thought, because his eyes where always on her. Her once bright emerald eyes became dull.
Why is she crying? Why is she dancing there? He slowly walked over to here
Never has the common beauty to the eye, taken such a grasp on my heart. You have one thing that the others don't. She danced beautifully. Her steps were precise, but not stiff. but she made one wrong step and fell in the water. "Michiru!"
If I cannot obtain the it,
Then life is not worth living,
No love, means No life. Her mind said as she closed her eyes. She thought that she was dead, until she felt something on her lips. She opened her eyes, only to see that he gave her a mouth on mouth. "Michiru, are you alright? Why did you do that?" "Because no love means no live." "What do you mean. I love you and nobody ells. Well, and my family of course." Her eyes widened at his confession but giggled at the third sentence. "W-what are you laughing at." he stammered. "I'm just happy." He then laughed with her, happy that she didn't die.
Hope you like it. Poem: Elegance Unbearable by Casey Lone on fiction press.
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