I got the sudden urge to write something tonight and this is what came of it. (kind of written vomit...) Anyway, to anyone who cares, would you read it and CRITIQUE me?? It's not much, like a really short prologue to a story I might decide to write. I don't care if you say it sucks, just please let me know the following:

1. Is it clear or confusing?
2. Should I be more descriptive? (I'm usually very visual with my writing)
3. Is it an okay opening?
4. Does it catch your attention?
5. What can I fix/improve?
6. Do the characters seem flat or cliche?
7. Would you want to read more?
Any of this will help!! Thanks.

Under cover of a stormy night, a woman was lying in a pool of blood. The pool, ever thickening, stained the drenched earth beneath her. Multiple wounds marked her weakened body and throbbed when she tried to move. She grunted in pain as she stretched out her left hand towards a band of prayer beads – her weapon of choice. There’s still chance I can – she thought weakly, but her efforts were stopped when a booted foot came down on her hand heavily. A scream escaped from her throat as more pressure was applied to her hand, crushing it.
“Sorry, woman, but a frail creature like you has no hope of ever sealing me away,” a dark voice stated with a mocking tone. With that, the dark figure kicked the beads a few meters away from the dying woman.
“Vile demon,” the woman spoke defiantly while lifting her head up with great difficulty.
In a fit of anger, demon turned its foot and hooked the woman’s face, forcing her to scream again. The energy behind the kick left the woman on her back, face up to the driving rain.
“Damn woman…” the demon growled, “you should’ve kept your mouth shut. Now your existence is forfeit.” The demon then unclasped a three-ringed armband from the woman’s right arm. The armband marked the woman as a karinin, or hunter of demons. “You won’t be needing this anymore. Farewell.”
The demon disappeared from the woman’s senses. Energy gone, she closed her eyes and fell to death’s embrace in the torrential darkness.

And that's all I've got so far. Let me know what you think.