Wow, that was really awesome. Your rhyme scheme works so well...wow~ You should rhyme more often. It's kinda depressing, but I really like it. "whorish"? Lol. Well, I hope you're doing ok and that this isn't some sort of hint of you feeling depressed! I don't know, but uh, we all have sides to ourselves that we don't want to show to others. But it doesn't mean that that part nor the one that you do show aren't the "real" you. If you haven't, you should play the game Persona 4. Lol, I've been playing it a lot...and that's a common theme! Finding your "true" self and dealing with the other side of yourself that you try to hide.
Virtual Rum
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/04/09 | Reply
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Pa-Pura Karasu
Otakuite++ | Posted 03/28/09 | Reply
i like it very much. Excellent job!!! you should write more often.
oh and where have you been??? go on more often please!!!1 show mrsdepro
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 03/27/09 | Reply
Wow, that was really awesome. Your rhyme scheme works so well...wow~ You should rhyme more often. It's kinda depressing, but I really like it. "whorish"? Lol. Well, I hope you're doing ok and that this isn't some sort of hint of you feeling depressed! I don't know, but uh, we all have sides to ourselves that we don't want to show to others. But it doesn't mean that that part nor the one that you do show aren't the "real" you. If you haven't, you should play the game Persona 4. Lol, I've been playing it a lot...and that's a common theme! Finding your "true" self and dealing with the other side of yourself that you try to hide.
Anyhoo, nice job.