Hmm but I like to read other peoples writings. On one hand I'm really tempted to write something as well but at the moment I don't have inspiration. I guess I'd really have to sit down for it :P
Pretty cool! Lots of details description and you really brought that tension in. Although, try not too use too many 'heavy breathing'. I'd love to read more X3
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/04/13 | Reply
@CipherPol:
Hmm but I like to read other peoples writings. On one hand I'm really tempted to write something as well but at the moment I don't have inspiration. I guess I'd really have to sit down for it :P
You're welcome ^^
CipherPol
SarhH (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/04/13 | Reply
@Aryia:
lol thanks for the feed back 030
i wasn't expecting people to read it, esp. since it's literally one paragraph in and i didn't edit yet
but yeah thanks ^^
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/04/13 | Reply
Pretty cool! Lots of details description and you really brought that tension in. Although, try not too use too many 'heavy breathing'. I'd love to read more X3