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Chapter 5 death
So Trevor and garret walked up the stairs when they got up there. There was blood everywhere. Then kirk yelled, up here. So garret and Trevor ran up the stairs in to the attic. Garret ran to neno and hugged her. Kirk what happened. I don’t now, it happen so fast I heard gunshots outside. then Rebecca and Maya came running in saying that Chris, Billy and Jill are dead and Leon is trap in the bus then a lot of zombies came in. we were out numbered so we ran up to the attic and there are nemesis down there. So far I counted two. Well I found garret said Trevor. Ok let’s go kick some zombie butt, yelled Shelby. So Kirk, Shelby and Rebecca went down first. Then Allen, Neno and garret went down. Then Maya and Trevor went down. When they got down there. Five zombies were chewing on Jill and Billy. Trevor got out his sword and ran up to the zombies and cut their legs off. I hope you won’t miss your legs. Then Kirk got out his gun and shot them in the head. Then Leon came out of the bus. Hurry up lets go we have to go to New York; I just got off the phone with Neno’s dad, he’s waiting for us so we have to go