The Watcher in The Shadows

hey guys and gals. this is one of my very first attempts at story writing i wrote this when i was in 11th grade in high school. well i hope you enjoy it. remember comment please XD

Should have guessed something like this would have happened.First the furniture was over turned and misplaced haphazardly around the room,Second I heard footsteps originating from the attic so I thought I would check it out. Biggest mistake ever. when I went up there and saw that there was nothing there I decided to just go back downstairs and fix a cup of tea for my nerves. For some really stupid reason I called my friend over and we decided to use a Ouija board. Almost four days after we did that, I stopped being able to sleep. nightmares and dreams of a very disturbing nature started to plague my dreams and I kept on hearing heavy breathing that was inlaid with a child's laugh. One night I decide to call the ghosts or whatever they were out and to leave me alone, once again big mistake. A second after I called out every door in my house opened and slammed shut rapidly,I shouted out to the spirit that I wasnt scared, all the doors closed except the one in front of me. the inside of the door was a light absorbing black and from somwhere within I could hear children singing " Ring around the rosie, pocket full of posies, ashes ashes your gonna die now". as I walked toward the door a large shadow jumped out from within the blackness. The shade walks up to me and in a deep breathy husky voice that has an echo of a child says "are you scared now?". unable to speak I only nod. with a huge head splitting grin the monster says " you shouldn't be because your on Scare Tactics"! "Really!" I shout in disbelief. " No" replies the monster. As I turn away from the monster to run away my world goes black

THE END

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Hurt

i wrote this because i was extremely sad about some family members dying and my ex-girlfriend doing something that ticked me off. just so people know i have horrible clutter prevention skills so this is actually from a while back

Stab, crush, stomp, squish this is the status of my heart

I will forever be in pain
Why you ask? well i will explain

I loved a girl as beautiful as nothing ever seen before
But she kept her feelings behind closed doors

My only wish was for her to show me she loved me
But she only played mind games that did nothing but hurt me

She made me question my very being then told me she was just joking
My love for her if there was an accurate measurement would be off the charts
I thought that we were kindred souls connected by soul and by hearts

The rest of the tale is sad and lonely
With me just sitting for along time in mourning

For those of you in love
Cherish it for i have none

Beasts of Blood

Muscles rippling under the skin, ready to fight
Eyes glow with an unnatural light

Claws like scimitars and guillotine like jaws
Now is not the time to pause

Flitting like a shadow across the floor
If they catch you, you will know no more

Guttural growls and barks, and Eye widening screams and shrieks
How do you act with your fear past its peak

With breath smelling of a corpse and bits of flesh between its teeth
They can rise from the ground and attack from beneath

May the Chinese fake Elixir give you strength this night
For to survive you must fight with all your might

Your party started with more at days end
Who will be left when the sun has risen

None are left alive in the Beasts gory flood
For They exist as nothing but... Beasts of blood

Killer's Nocturne

okay before i spin this gruesome rhyme...just in case no one heeded my warning THIS IS A VERY... DARK POEM...i do not condone anything here so...yeah hope you like...plz feel free to comment...i enjoy hearing from you guys

With macabre scenes of grizzly deaths
You alone take away the last breaths

Burning,stabbing,cutting,biting
Your methods are quite harrowing

You hold the unholy power over life and over death

You can set them free and bestow the breath of life
Or you can rip out their souls and cause eternal strife

With deceiving eyes and saccharine grin
You wait for their backs turn so your sacred massacre can begin

Stores of hardware,sporting goods,and convenience are the best
For you to stock up your torture chest

Terror explodes and makes people conflicted
About who is next to have your torture upon them inflicted

For the horrors you've done
Bring memories of atrocities from the minds of Nazi scientists and the land of the rising sun

Bloody curdling screams and gritty eviseration
Acid eaten flesh and jagged decapitation

After all the inhuman,unholy things you've done
Your punishment is banishment to the realm of the black sun