first off,how do yall like crash!!

crash!! is my shojo project about a boy,richard,who finds a disc that changes the way girls think of him
problem hes already in a steady relationship with a girl he loves
a couple of strange characters apear and cause even more chaos
how will richard deal with his first incounter with the discs effects?
tell me what you think after your done reading,critisism is wanted ,i wish too improove any thing that bodes ill fer my manga
also if you wish to see more crash!!,check out the myspace

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also,if you wanna help me get 36inc going help is wanted,
no pay its just fer fun fer now
untill i get better eqiupment
if you do just say so