story **spoiler warning**

i've been writeing a story besides the one tammy and I are working togeather on... the chapters are a little long... so i'm kinda worried that no one will read it... should i break it down? that would make it look longer... i don't know if i should post it...

i know tammy... u would read it anyways...

so i'm just woundering who would read it... and who wouldn't?

it will be filled with romance, action, comedy, betrail and all sorts of things... (too early in the morning for me to go on) it will have the birth of the first vampires and werewolves as well as demonic beings both good and evil. i just think it will be a great success but i don't know how to get people to read it... maybe i will finish a few more chapters before submitting anything...

a little about it

it starts off as the main charictor (Fenrir) haveing to do the bidding of an evil master who comands sevral more people like him. He gose to earth with a mission trying to free his master with a girl he hates to death. But he falls in love with a girl that he thinks is as beautiful as an angel. later he will find out that he wasn't too far off. "The angel" (as he refers to her a lot) has a father that is trying to set her up with a rich and powerful man who Fenrir finds out that he is the 'father' of vampires.

If want to see how far Fenrir will go to free himself from his master and get the girl of his dreams... then read my story... i hope u guys will like it

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