Mythical Creatures and Me...Nope,Still Doesn't Sound Right

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"Jazz!!Jazzy!!Jazzy,please wake up!!!!"
I kept calling out to her but she wouldn't wake up.So many emotions were running threw me.I was happy that I was alive,angry that I let this happen to Jazzy,sad because nothing was waking her up but most of all,I was scared that she wouldn't wake up.
"Isn't there anything you can do?"
Then all of a sudden Jazz started thrashing around and mumbling things.In think she said 'let me go'.Then she stopped.Ryan put his ear beside her lips and he gave us a worried look.
"She's not breathing"
He said.
"WHAT?!?!?She has to be!!!!"
I yelled feeling for her pulse.But I didn't get one.
"My god,JAZZY WAKE UP NOW!!!!!!!
Suddenly she bolted up and gasped for air while coughing up water.
"Jazzy,what happened to you?"
Kyle asked.

i'll be posting all the pictures of the characters in case you forgot what they looked like.I'm starting with KYLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I think.That is Kyle,right?I'm pretty sure it is.Oh,jeez,I even forgot what my characters look like.Well,except for Jazzy and Alex.Who could forget them?They're the main characters.

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