Mythical Creatures and Me...Nope,Still Doesn't Sound Right

_____________________________________CHAPTER 11_______________________________
"But-"
Aidan stuttered.
"But they're-"
Kyle stuttered.
"They're-they're GIRLS!!!!"
Seth finished while he gaped at us.
"That's right.We are girls.And if you wanna end up like him over here I suggest you shut the hell up.Clear?
I asked with my head tilted to the side in an innocent manner.They all nodded while Aaron smiled at us.We returned the gesture and walked back into the mansion.We walked up the stairs while Aaron followed leaving the other guys shocked and an unconscious demon.
"Jazzy,this'll be your room and beside hers is yours,Jessica"
I looked into my room and all my stuff was there.There were also two other doors.I looked into the one on my right and it was a walk-in closet while the other was the bathroom.And there was the most greatest thing there.It was like heaven on earth.It was my ruler,my omen-I think you get it.It was.....It was.....The shower.I sighed and looked at its' beauty.After about two seconds of praising it and thanking God for giving me this.I quickly stripped and jumped in without hesitation.Being covered with flour,eggs,milk and only God knows what a warm shower was really needed.I took at least a 30 minute shower and then got out.I wrapped a towel around my body,cranked my iPod and got ready singing along to 'Survive' by 'Rise Against'.

I slipped on a simple black shirt with a skull on it and black faded skinny jeans.While I was putting on my skull necklace and guitar earrings I heard a knock at my door.I walked over to it and opened it.It turned out to be Seth,Kyle and Aidan.
"We're.......Sorry for laughing at your fighting abilities"
They all said at the same time.With struggle on the word 'sorry'.They obviously didn't say that often.
"Oh and yours and Jazzy's car is outside.Oh,and Aaron mentioned to bring you back your guitar"
My eyes widened with excitement when they said 'guitar' and Jazzy's door opened when they mentioned her baby.
"My car?"
She asked with hopeful eyes.
"Yes,your car Jazzy"
Ryan said irritated.And that's all that was needed to say before Jazzy ran out of her room,down the stairs and probably outside to her car.Where she'd be hugging and kissing it.Oh,forgot to mention,it was obvious that she took a shower also because her hair was wet and dripping onto the ground.

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