Mythical Creatures and Me...Nope,Still Doesn't Sound Right

CHAPTER 1.5
_________Never go outside at 1am not matter what you left in your car_________
RECAP:"You don't sound so excited""Really i thought i was"I said sarcastically.
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The bartender laughed and went to go serve other people while the 2 guys came over.
*Great,just what i need*
"Enjoying yourself?"The first guy asked.I just ignored them hoping they would go away.
"Awww,she's trying to ignore us.Sorry,sweetie,that won't work"The second guy said.I was just about ready to break his wrist.The first one sat beside and placed his hand on my thigh.
"How about we take you back to our place and have some fun?"
*Ewwwww*
I was just about ready to punch him across his face but unfortunately the bartender came back.
"Lil' lady,are these men bothering you"He asked.
"Just a little"I replied.
"Security!!"Just then 2 big guys came and one of them tyson.He always has my back.They picked the 2 guys which i just noticed had really pale skin and red eyes.Talk about creepy.Tyson and the other big dude took them outside.
"Security won't always be there to save you!!"One of the guys called back to me as he was being dragged out.
"Thanks,i owe you"I said to the bartender.
"Don't worry about it.It's my job"

I would write more but i'm too tired.I'll continue this later when i'm more awake.

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