preview for my new FMA fanfic, "Know and Remember".

Animegal/jenny: this i just a test! just to see how my story will do. Rating T for teen because of Eds potty mouth.
Ed: Yeah, knowing you, your just going to make me look like a dumbass anyways.
jenny:
Al: Brother, don't be so mean jenny!
jenny: no Al, don't apologize for Eds mistakes. and besides, i don't have to make you look like a dumbass because you already are one!
Ed: WELL AT LEST I'M NOT A GIANT THAT HAS FEET THE SIZE OF TEXAS!
Al: Brother!
Jenny: I'D RATHER BE A GIANT THAN SOME PERVERTED PIPSQUEAK!
Al: Jenny!
Ed: WHO ARE YOU CALLEN A PERVERTED SMALL SPECK OF DUST!
Al: ...
Jenn: OH YEAH, I'M NOT SHORT(unlike a certain midget) BECAUSE I DRINK MIL-
?: ENOUGH!
Al, Ed, Jenny: WHAT THE-!
Al: Where did that voice come from?
?: It is I! Kristy, the Oc of this story!
Ed, Jenn: WTF?
Jenny: Kristy! Your not suppose to show up until then end of the preview!
Kristy: Well, i decided to make a surprise appearance.
Jenn: ok then. Well, i don't want to delay the preview any longer so...HIT IT KRISTY!
Kristy: *grabs microphone* Testing, testing 1.2.3?...Ok, Animegal/jenny does not own FMA but she owns me, my adoptive family and the plot.
Ed, Al, Jenny, Kristy: Until next time, Ja!!;)

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Know and Remember preview

]Hello, my name is Kristina-Kristy for short. I'm 14, I have rusty colored hair that reaches a little past my shoulder blades, i have hazel eyes, and i'm 5 ft. 2 in. tall. I am currently living with my adoptive parents, Anita and Patrick Westling. They're the best parents i could ever ask for!
But after about a two years of be a Westling, some freak accident happened and everything went black for me for about 5 minutes. When i woke up, i was standing infront of a gate. I starred in silent horror as the gate screeched open, and i saw these creepy, black demonic children. Then a voice spoke, "If you wish to cross over to the other side of this gate, then you must pay the price of two things. One will be your age; i will take 4 years off your current life. The other price you must pay is your right leg. In exchange, you will gain knowledge and to be able to cross to the other side." After the voice had spoken, a hand shot out of the gate and ripped my right leg off. I screamed in pain as i fell to my other leg, clutching my bleeding use-to-be leg. Then more hands shot out of the gate and and pulled me in.
"No! I don't want to go! I want to stay with my family! Noooo! Mom, Dad, help me please!" I screamed as tears gushed down my face. I screamed yet again as vasts amount of knowledge was crammed into my head. Then the next thing i knew, it was back to unconsciousness for me.
TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Kristy, Jenn: Please tell us how we did! Be nice and comment this!

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