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Naruto awoke in the hospital. Lady Tsunade was going over his medical charts. Sakura was fussing over his sheets. He slowly tried to get up but was pushed back down hard by Sakura." What the hell, Sakura?! Are you trying to kill me or something?!" He said screaming his head off.
Sakura looked like she wanted to punch him for a second but turned to lady Tsunade instead."Is he alright Tsunade-sama? Did you find the cause of his cardiac arrest?"
Lady Tsunade had a puzzled look on her face as she stared at Naruto. "Did you train in the rain a couple of days ago?" She said looking his charts over once more.
Naruto tried to remember if he did. " Nope. I stayed inside all day and slept. I have been really tired lately. I also saw......never mind." Naruto didn't want them to know about his dream. It had scare him a little. He didn't want to worry Lady Tsunade or Sakura.
Sakura looked at Naruto with a worried look."Hey Naruto... you can tell us. OK?" she said trying to reaussre him.
Naruto looked up and a big smile came on his face. Sakura felt relieved he would take about his felling until he screamed out "Iruka-sensi! What are you doing here?" He said sounding happy which didn't make Sakura feel needed.
Iruka just scratched his head" Well i heard you passed out in the street. And i never ever remember you ever getting sick so i was worried. I guess you were just tired from your sage training right?" He said kindly to Naruto.
"Exactly..."Sakura was going to tell Iruka the truth but Naruto kicked her.
"Yeah, it is way to hard. Hey, Iruka-sensi, How bout you treat me to some ramen for my speedy recover!" Naruto said with a huge smile.
Iruka laughed as Naruto put his clothes(his jacket) on" Sure, but don't you get free ramen?"
"O yeah. HA HA. See ya later Granny and Sakura." With that he closed the door leaving a confused Tsunade and irritated Sakura.
"Tsunade-sama! Why didn't you stop him from lying to Iruka-sensi? He told Iruka-sensi it was nothing, when he knows it was something!" Saura was turning red from angry.
"Iruka probably knows he is lying or knows he stopped breathing for 10 minutes. Either way, he won't bug Naruto since Naruto is better. All he will do is comfront Naruto. That Iruka will make a great father one day." Even though Tsunade said all this, Sakura was still worried about Naruto not telling Iruka.
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Naruto was walking home alone from the ramen shop because Iruka had to go on a mission. "Sorry Naruto. Next time we'll hang out longer, ok?" was what he said to Naruto.
Naruto had just shrugged and waved him goodbye. Truth be told Naruto was feeling tired, rundown, and most of all lonely. So he decided to walk around Konoha just in case he saw someone. Will he was walking towards the Hyuga tenements, he felt a strangely cold breeze on such a hot night. "Where the hell did that..." He didn't finish his sentence due to the fact, he had somehow ended up in front of the Uchiha clans old area. "Wasn't i like 30 blocks away? How the hell did i get here?" He said nervously.
Suddenly the gate, which was chained up until a second ago, opened slowly. Naruto started to shiver in fear but he controlled himself. " HEY! Konohamaru! You better not be messing with me you little brat!!"
When there was no response, Naruto began to shiver violently and sickly." Wow, there it goes again." As he was passing out he saw his child self again. Only this time someone was holding him up. Someone who was stopping him from touching Naruto. A tall blond man in ninja clothes, a leaf headband and a white jacket with red and orange flames. " Who......... Prevy-sage?"
IT was a cloudy day. naruto had been trying to ignore the pain in his chest for weeks but now it was unbareable. "I have to go see granny or my chest will blow up." he said as he hurried out his front door. he was hurring through town when he bumped someone.
"where are you going?"said a kind voice he recongized.
It was shino who, as usual, was covered from head to toe. Naruto didn't realize who it was for a second. "O its just you, shino. I'm on my way to see granny. wanna come?" naruto asked grabbing his chest.
Shino noticed the clench and pushed something into naruto's hand. "Here. Hinata said to invite to her picnic party on saturaday. You had better get well and come or i'll have kiba send akamaru after you." With that scarely warning, he turned away from Naruto and walked away.
Naruto was a little shocked. He then yelled after Shino" Who the hell do you think you ar...ARGH!" He fell to the floor still clenching his chest.'Its getting worse. Gotta get to granny's quick or i'll die..." Naruto collasped in the middle of the road as the rain started.
Naruto awoke in his mind. the dark corridors seemed to quiet. exacty the water had just frozen in spot as if time had stopped. As he walked his foots echoed but he still heard the ones behind him." Who's there?! Show yourself coward!"
There was no response to Naruto's resquest, so he just ingored it and keep walking. Once he got to Kyuubi's chamber he gasped. Kyuubi had been frozen in time. " Hey Kyuubi...are you ok?" When he touched the bars, he heard snickering.
When he turned around, he was staring at his himself as a child. "Who...no..What are you?" he said shivering just a bit.
".......I'm you........and all your hate.."It said in a evil way. he had a clock in his hand, his finger was holding the second hand."All i want to say is....i'm everything you fear and hate..one day you will release me..one day." With that it diappeared and time seemed to start again.
will add rest of part one soon...srry
