Don't Go (p1)

Ok , so this is my first IchiRuki story. I just came up with the idea, so comment on what you think.
:3

'It's over...it's finally over.' Ichigo Kurosaki thought as he feel to his knees. He had just killed Ulquiorra , and saved Orihime. Orihime ran to Ichigo's side.
"Kurosaki-kun!" She yelled, and in Ichigo's mind, a voice rang out.
'Ichigo!' Ichigo smiled . It was her voice, the one that has made the strawberry melt along with the snow. Ichigo grapped his chest, and coughed up a red sustans, blood. Ichigo gasped for breathe as a small shinigami had just appeared through the large hole in the wall that Ichigo had made on first arriving. Seeing Ichigo on the ground, made the small shinigami run even faster.
"Ichigo!" She yelled, and ran to his side.
"Ruk..i...a" Ichigo managed to say.
"Ichigo! You can't...no Ichigo, don't die!" Rukia Kuchiki had remembered saying that before. It was as pure and try as when she first said it.
Ichigo's eyes started to fade as he struggled for life. Rukia say as Orihime helped him on his back. Her eyes widened as Orihime almost screamed.
It was a disastor, Ichigo was bleeding everywhere. The blood was so thick, you couldn't see where the wounds were. Orihime panicked, and started healing him. Rukia held back tears as Byakuya and Renji appeared by her. Then everyone started to come that had entered Hueco Mundo to save Orihime , and help everyone that had gone along with Ichigo. Tears started to silently flow from Rukia's eyes. Slow, silent tears, as Ichigo stared up at her.
He smiled, and she felt like slapping him and telling him
'Damn it Ichigo ! It's not ok!'
But she just smiled back. She wanted to hold his hand, but the barrior around him was too strong for her to break through to him. Rukia looked at Inoue, who was crying even heavier than she was, and almost at the point of breaking down. Rukia looked away, and Orihime looked at Rukia. Her heart stopped as she saw the blank expression in her eyes. The same one Ichigo had in his the day Grimmjow had serverly hurt Rukia. Orihime's tears flowed at a steady pace now, but only wiped them off once.
Rukia's mind was at the point was exploding as Ichigo's breathing got even faster.
"Ichigo..no, don't go Ichigo, don't go.." She started saying, not even caring about all the people around her.
"Ichigo, don't die, don't go, please, please Ichigo !" She stared saying it louder and louder, until there was no feeling in Ichigo's eyes, and their was no motion from his chest.
"ICHIGOOOOOOO!" Rukia screamed, and Orihime's sheild broke. Rukia scrambled over to him as everyone looked away, even Byakuya looked as if he was going to cry, even Mayuri Kurotsuchi had a distant expression that he had never had before.
Rukia placed her small hands over him, and continuously screamed his name. Blood was getting all over her, his blood, and because it was his blood, she didn't care, not one bit.
Rukia placed her head on his bloody chest, and screamed until her voice was getting fainter and fainter. She grabbed his cold hand, and started sobbing.
"Rukia.." Renji said, and walked over to her. He placed a hand on her back, and stared down at Ichigo, and then quickly looked away. Rukia, still sobbing, used her free hand to grab his coldened face. She rubbed it with her palm gently, and brushed back his hair that had become entangled in the blood. Seeing more of his blood only made her cry harder. Every thing was silent except for her sobbing.
"Ich-i-go, ich-ee-go!" She kept saying and then, without a second thought, kissed him. She kissed his cold lips , and the blood that had gotten on them smeared onto his. She pressed her forhead onto his, and then cried some more, Renji, who had been watching her this whole time, walked back over to Byakuya, who had by now, gotten closer to his sister.
Rukia then whispered so that only she could hear, and if Ichigo was alive, he could.
"Ichigo, I love you."
Rukia then kissed his forehead one more time.
Byakuya then came over to her.
"Rukia.." Rukia looked up at him, whose eyes had widened, and were staring down at Ichigo. Rukia quickly looked back. Ichigo's lips were moving.
Ichigo, was alive.

End P1

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