The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/05/13 | Reply
This is a beautiful and very poetic way to use words. They set the mood, act as textures and create a beautiful background ripples like the ocean. I really like the combination of fonts that serve to both morph light and shadow. In fact, the words call to mind many aspects of the sea, the hidden/camouflaged words could be for mystery, 'deadly current' nearly transparent and forgotten but still there, the danger in the beauty, the large font for roar following by the smaller elegant text, the loud slam of waves followed by the lull as the tide pulls back... The orchestra of the words just sneaks up on you, when you're already enchanted by the ocean. My favorite lines are in the end: "the show is endless and the tune plays day and night." This is a spellbinding tribute to the ocean's musical performance.
I almost wish that I could read the words without interruption, yet that part brings out the mystery. Therefore, I can't complain too loudly. The only thing I might have changed are your font choices. I would have played with more variety and more elegant typography.
Thank you very much for entering my contest. You did a wonderful job, even if you had trouble.
VERY creative background! I love that she looks a bit sad, thoughtful and that you write a lot of words in the background - as in what she's thinking about.
SOLDIER 1st Class (Otaku Legend) | Posted 10/14/13 | Reply
Oh my I love the text and different fonts you used. It looks awesome with your textures and the different sizes and fonts really give it a deeper character. Great job!
Embrace your dreams. If you want to be a hero, you need to have dreams
I really like your use of the text here!
The partly hidden look is good and the use of font and scale is great!
It also looks like you used layer styes to your advantage and it all looks good! ^-^
Last edited by tsubasachro at 3:16:38 AM EDT on October 14, 2013.
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/05/13 | Reply
This is a beautiful and very poetic way to use words. They set the mood, act as textures and create a beautiful background ripples like the ocean. I really like the combination of fonts that serve to both morph light and shadow. In fact, the words call to mind many aspects of the sea, the hidden/camouflaged words could be for mystery, 'deadly current' nearly transparent and forgotten but still there, the danger in the beauty, the large font for roar following by the smaller elegant text, the loud slam of waves followed by the lull as the tide pulls back... The orchestra of the words just sneaks up on you, when you're already enchanted by the ocean. My favorite lines are in the end: "the show is endless and the tune plays day and night." This is a spellbinding tribute to the ocean's musical performance.
I almost wish that I could read the words without interruption, yet that part brings out the mystery. Therefore, I can't complain too loudly. The only thing I might have changed are your font choices. I would have played with more variety and more elegant typography.
Thank you very much for entering my contest.
You did a wonderful job, even if you had trouble.
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/16/13 | Reply
VERY creative background! I love that she looks a bit sad, thoughtful and that you write a lot of words in the background - as in what she's thinking about.
Soulanime14
SOLDIER 1st Class (Otaku Legend) | Posted 10/14/13 | Reply
Oh my I love the text and different fonts you used. It looks awesome with your textures and the different sizes and fonts really give it a deeper character. Great job!
Embrace your dreams. If you want to be a hero, you need to have dreams
Hifsa
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/14/13 | Reply
I love the texture you have added! Its looks so much better now :) And I love the editing, the way youmade the girl a little darker! Keep at it :)
tsubasachro
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/13 | Reply
I really like your use of the text here!
The partly hidden look is good and the use of font and scale is great!
It also looks like you used layer styes to your advantage and it all looks good! ^-^
Last edited by tsubasachro at 3:16:38 AM EDT on October 14, 2013.