It's my first time to send it to a challenge. i just back to TheO
please tell me what is lacking from this picture, i don't really understand about OC.
a week ago, i joined a competition "MangaStyle".
i think it would be like other anime competition that we must drew Fan Art
but, the night before competition, the committee told me that we must draw an OC!!!! (sorry for my bad English)
and i draw it without passion.-_-
so, i want to learn more about it. please help me
i draw it in traditional art.

Thank you Viollet!!!! i like your "Morning" idea. Thanks for let me draw your OC
Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!

Please give your opinion ><
Sorry if i make 2 submit. i forget to add the Challenges...hehehe