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    liisaan

    Senior Otaku | Posted 08/25/05 | Reply

    Another great pic! AND wow you tried shading in colour! I hate shading at the best of times and your colouring really made the piece come alive, you should colour more pics in the future!

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    ElvesAteMyRamen

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/23/05 | Reply

    Oh very nice, Kiyoshima! I really like how you did the eyes!! They're so elegent and graceful!! The coloring is also nicely done. I like how you added the highlights in there and put them throughout the image! The only thing that I would say you may want to work on is the figure poportion...her body slowly gets thinner from the head down to her waist. Don't worry, MANY people do it. What I would recommend is when drawing the image, after you finish the rough sketch, prop it up and step back from it and look at it from a distance. Doing this will help you see right away what's wrong with the image. When you have a drawing laying down flat as you're drawing it, you're at a slight angle so things tend to get a little warped. Just a little suggestion^_^