Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/03/10 | Reply
Hey Kailith!! I thought it'd be nice to show my appreciation for your having commented my work by commenting in return. So again, thank you so much for your comment from a while back >.<
This is really adorable~ I think you've really got something going for you here! Her pose is really cute, definitely characteristic of a shy girl in school that's afraid to get around. But she has a little smile on her face, which is nice<3
I love the color of her clothes~ they really do make her stand out against the placid color of the lockers behind her as well~
Hm...critique-wise..I'd say take a look at her proportions a bit. Her neck is a tad bit long and she gets too thin at the waist~ give her a bit more meat around the torso =P A great way to practice attention to detail is re-drawing some pictures in mangas or animes~ it gives you a basis for your own original art too ^^
Keep up the great work~! I'll be watching out for your art!
Kewl! I have more art to post, but I can't because i'm on What? you didn't think I'd TELL you, dod you? then you'd know where i live! You stalking pervert!
Mijmo
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
@Kailith:
oh dear...
Kailith
Eternal Scout (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
@Mijmo:
Hee hee I stalk! Just kidding.
Kailith
Eternal Scout (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
@aragorn1014:
Hee thanks for the comment! And thanks for the critique! I really appreciate ways to improve my art. :D
I love your art style, so keep drawing!
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/03/10 | Reply
Hey Kailith!! I thought it'd be nice to show my appreciation for your having commented my work by commenting in return. So again, thank you so much for your comment from a while back >.<
This is really adorable~ I think you've really got something going for you here! Her pose is really cute, definitely characteristic of a shy girl in school that's afraid to get around. But she has a little smile on her face, which is nice<3
I love the color of her clothes~ they really do make her stand out against the placid color of the lockers behind her as well~
Hm...critique-wise..I'd say take a look at her proportions a bit. Her neck is a tad bit long and she gets too thin at the waist~ give her a bit more meat around the torso =P A great way to practice attention to detail is re-drawing some pictures in mangas or animes~ it gives you a basis for your own original art too ^^
Keep up the great work~! I'll be watching out for your art!
Mijmo
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 01/03/10 | Reply
Kewl!
I have more art to post, but I can't because i'm on What? you didn't think I'd TELL you, dod you? then you'd know where i live! You stalking pervert!
wh2000
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/02/10 | Reply
how about quiet school girl