Well done. I like the composition and the grass affect. Also nice shadows. Ok now to the point: maybe a little bit messy. Things tend to get that way if you do them all on the computer like the spaces between lines. Maybe try scanning a bit more.

nice i like it. did you do that on paint?

I'm.....I'm.....Speechless.....!^^(Kai's cute)

Oo! me likie ^.^ Go kai!!!