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    Magician Princess

    Senior Otaku | Posted 01/21/08 | Reply

    Try a variation on the thickness of the lines, particularly the eyes and yeah the hand but the hair rocks, I love the fact that you actualy drew him at 11pm XD I dunno why. That just hads to the appeal. Also, NEW ABRIDGED. Rock on.

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    ShadeyCharacter

    Grand Otaku | Posted 01/21/08 | Reply

    I think you did well Kibou! The only thing I see is what you have already mentioned, and that's his hand. It's a tad bit on the small side. ...and the puzzle is a little miss shapen just widen it at the top a 'tiny' bit and it should be fine.