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    Otakuite | Posted 05/28/07 | Reply

    *nods* its pretty good. so good that i dont have anything to say on it. lol

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/28/07 | Reply

    ...awesome catchphrase XD i know i say this every time, but really, your faces are so awesome and i don't think you need to add lines to that hand unless you want to get really really detailed, it is folded over after all so you wouldn't see the fingers. you could put on knuckles if you wanted though. and i like the hair too O.o

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    Senior Otaku | Posted 05/27/07 | Reply

    i think its great! i just think you need to work on the hand holding the spear. i just think you need to add lines to his hands showing the sepreation of his fingers. ^^ and i think you can make his feet a tad bit smaller. but overall i think this is awesome OC!! X3