great job!

That's good for only working on it for forty minutes.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa(crys eyes out) this part is sooo sad.*Sniff sniff* not just beacuse kiba almost gets killed and the others r hurt, but becuse cheza is giving herself up to safe them!(even if i don't like her that much)

awesome job :-D

It doesn't look sloppy. Great job, love the wolf. ^-^