I mean it was useful to me because it was like a recap. These chapters have been coming in weekly. Kinda like "Previously on Yugiho..." But if its going to be in a book you should probably reword it into something else. Maybe a reaction?
I forgot to write it in (I should probably do that now) but he says, "He seemed like a pretty intresting guy. And we all don't want our entertainment to be killed off." Gray has a feeling though that he was forced to do that.
Mwahaha! Everyone was so sure that it was Gray! But I'm the author and I say NO ONE knows what's happening!!
You know I'm starting to appreciate the fact that Gray has been to our world and is able to make earth references.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its just not fair! Why is she relieved that Dark saved her? Isn't she going to have explain to everyone how she got a RARE dragon?
Last edited by frowbling at 8:42:23 PM CDT on August 21, 2010.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/24/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
Oh good luck with US History. I took it last year. It is easily the hardest AP out there. Half my class was gone after the first semester.
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/24/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
English and US History.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
What subjects?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
Yeah, 2.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
Any APs?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
I don't know I've just went to school and I'm not feeling like writing so much.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
No I was taking about the first sentence of the chapter. It doesn't matter anymore.
So when am I gonna see the next chapter?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/23/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
You said refrain from some sentence.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/22/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
What? No. What are we talking about?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/22/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
You mean the announcer? Or the loss? Because none of that's happening anymore.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/22/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
I mean it was useful to me because it was like a recap. These chapters have been coming in weekly. Kinda like "Previously on Yugiho..." But if its going to be in a book you should probably reword it into something else. Maybe a reaction?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/22/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
Haha, I know.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/21/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
Mean!
Oh and you should probably refrain from repeating the last line in the first sentence of the paragraph.
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/21/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
I forgot to write it in (I should probably do that now) but he says, "He seemed like a pretty intresting guy. And we all don't want our entertainment to be killed off." Gray has a feeling though that he was forced to do that.
Mwahaha! Everyone was so sure that it was Gray! But I'm the author and I say NO ONE knows what's happening!!
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/21/10 | Reply
@luffysister:
Hell yes! So unpredictable. I was so sure it was Gray. Why would Leucor save him?
luffysister
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/21/10 | Reply
@frowbling:
Yeah it's much easier to write from her perspective than anyone elses.
Would you rather explain why you had a dragon or be gravely injured? She was relieved that she didn't get stabbed in the back.
Were you surprised that it was Luecor who saved Aaron in the first round?
Last edited by luffysister at 9:03:01 PM CDT on August 21, 2010.
frowbling
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/21/10 | Reply
You know I'm starting to appreciate the fact that Gray has been to our world and is able to make earth references.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its just not fair! Why is she relieved that Dark saved her? Isn't she going to have explain to everyone how she got a RARE dragon?
Last edited by frowbling at 8:42:23 PM CDT on August 21, 2010.