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Someone special was on my mind...
I had a dream last night.
I dreamed you were in pain.
I came to take it all away,
And we were never the same
I had a dream last night,
With you so far away from me,
But, you quickly closed the distance
And filled my heart with glea.
I had a dream last night.
I was wearing white.
All I could think of was you,
And of our special night.
I had a dream last night.
I was wrinkled and grey.
But you were still there smiling,
And taking the pain away.
This isn't have bad, considering some of my poetry, and I love opinions and suggestions.
Breaking Free
I’m ready to cry,
I’m ready to die,
I’m ready to fly,
From these thoughts
I can no longer deny.
There’s nothing to see
Here, on the inside of me.
I tell myself,
Don’t bend, don’t Break.
But it all feels so fake.
It’s like I’m drowning in this lake.
Please, stop this nightmare
And make me awake.
I’m just not sure
How much more I can take.
I can feel the earth quake
But my body won’t shake
To the rhythm of this spree.
Now I’m seeing all the changes I can make.
So, here’s the claim I’m gonna stake,
I’m gonna break free
From the coils of this snake!
End
