Very cool. This is a really creative idea, I like it a lot. A few minimal grammar mistakes, but the story was SO GOOD, I didn't really care. Keep writing! I'd love to see how this ends. In fact, I'm going to go check out your world and see if you continued it. Great job, I really enjoyed it!
Oh, why thank you so much! You're welcome for the comment. My pleasure. So in other words, you're random, no? Okay. I'll keep writing for sure! Thanks again!
wow, REALLY GOOD! You did well. use your talent wisley. and thanx 4 the comment. my world is kinda crazy and different. i just spit out whatever is on my mind. so...yeah. keep writing chica!
-<^..^>
cherrichan13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/06/09 | Reply
Very cool. This is a really creative idea, I like it a lot. A few minimal grammar mistakes, but the story was SO GOOD, I didn't really care.
Keep writing! I'd love to see how this ends. In fact, I'm going to go check out your world and see if you continued it. Great job, I really enjoyed it!
Razing Phoenix
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 03/25/09 | Reply
@purplekittyartist:
Oh, why thank you so much! You're welcome for the comment. My pleasure. So in other words, you're random, no? Okay. I'll keep writing for sure! Thanks again!
~Razi-chan
purplekittyartist
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 03/25/09 | Reply
wow, REALLY GOOD! You did well. use your talent wisley. and thanx 4 the comment. my world is kinda crazy and different. i just spit out whatever is on my mind. so...yeah. keep writing chica!
-<^..^>
pedegg
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 11/25/08 | Reply
Nice,you described everything very well. good. awesome! I write too!You should give me feedback if you read it. If you want to you don't have to.
Last edited by pedegg at 10:35:50 PM EST on November 25, 2008.