Ahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
Great work m'boy! Great work!!!

*high fives* Ah, this story is a barrel full of laughs. What will my bro do next? ^_~

Hehe haha me likey. XD
Poor Kishimoto. He's given us waaay too much material to work with.
lol nail file. Win.

Nyeeessss, Nyeeeessss.

A couple of minor grammar and format errors, but the story itself is looking hilarious. I approve of this win.

I'll go ahead and hunt down some of the bugs later, if you want me to.

@jomz:

Let it be juicy. I wanna see juice. (but not somethin' creepy, or anything. heh. *starting off on the wrong foot* ^_^')

@TwistedCyberChick:

Thanks. ^_^

I'm not yet very decided on what Shin will experience in there... XD

This sounds hysterical. I'm soo stickin' around to see how it turns out. (Let Shin get roughed up in there, at least a little. XP)

@jomz:

Why should I automatically assume immunity? That would be rather impudent of me. <_< >_> Besides, I am highly curious.

@Nehszriah:

Don't think you'll be safe from this one... *grin*

I have a lot of plot holes to fill... ^_^
It's a crude attempt, I know.

lol, nice
Lee Owns

*laughing eye roll* Ah, jomz, jomz, jomz...