So I was bored one day sometime in the past two weeks and decided to write some emo poetry. It's pretty rough and I'm not looking for much help with the writing, but could you help me put the stanzas in order?
I'm marking them a-e. I only know where the last three will be. xD
I think this would sound better as a song than a poem. And maybe in some foreign language.
Here:
a)
What reason have I to return
If not for you
Ah...my sweet. Yes! Yes! My sweetest...
Your warm hands alone can peirce my heart.
b)
As I lay breathing softly
the sweet springtime air
May I dream that I be your knight
and your only?
As scarlet wine spills over my tongue
May I remember the fading
sweetness of thy gentle lips
c)
As I close my eyes
your sweet white light
reflects across the crimson sea.
Trust me, my dear. Yes! Yes! My dearest...
Reach, but should my hands stain yours...
d)
As I shut my tired eyes, i feel your soft breath,
and taste your purest white skin
Come, my one. Yes! Yes! My only...
So distant are you, your form grows distorted
e)
As my arm reaches out
to thy sweet golden locks,
May I reclaim your warm,
laughing eyes?
As they leak their warm
tears
I take comfort,
for am I forever on your mind...?
My darling, my only, my sweetest,
my love
Are you thinking of me
painted crimson sun's glow?
My dearest, my cherished, my angel,
my love
How are you, how are you
as each day and night goes?
once more
May I rest my head on your white evening gown
and your pale carresses close my weary eyes.
Once more, roses will bloom
And fallen leaves, once more, return to the sky.
Fin~
