Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/18/11 | Reply
Thank you so much! ; u ;
Yes, I do realize there is a VERY big absence of punctuation here, now! I don't know what I was thinking. I'm the biggest grammar Nazi I know, so it seems strange that I didn't put in the punctuation. Ahh, well.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and could sing along, mostly. The one part at the beginning, when you sing, "everything new is so ... lame ...!" has a bit of a pause between "so" and "lame." Other than that, I think everything else has the right amount of syllables. Haha xD
I did originally plan to sing this and put a parody of it on Youtube, but my voice sucks. I know, for parodies, people aren't as picky about it. But I'm self-concious. OTL
Anyway, thank you again! It was a very pleasant surprise!
The chain of justice-- the system-- never ends...
Detective Mask (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/17/11 | Reply
I apologize for the very long delay in deciding the challenge. Here are my comments:
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING: There seems to be an absence of punctuations here, but I think adding them would've been hard since the song seems to be dominated by phrases. I would prefer that the sentences be punctuated in order to indicate them as such. As for spelling, I don't see any errors.
COMPLIANCE WITH INSTRUCTIONS: You've managed to comply with the instructions, so good job on that.
ORIGINALITY: Some lyrics were indeed adapted from the original lyrics of the song, but in general you've managed to present very original lyrics in this piece. Great job!
CLARITY OF INTENDED MESSAGE: I can clearly see that this is more of a complaint of the Pokemon franchise. I can see that you do have a legitimate complaint, yet with this song parody you managed to express your complaint in a very lively way. Terrific job!
SMOOTH FLOW OF THE TUNE WITH THE LYRICS: It appears that the lyrics had a good timing with the tune of the song. I even managed to sing along with well, with considerable success. Good work!
OVERALL: Your song parody had very original lyrics and had a message that was presented in a very amusing manner. The timing of the tune was really good, and I think that people would really enjoy singing to this song of yours.
Because of that, I finally declare you as the winner of the 2010 Anime Song Parody Challenge.
I'm sorry for taking me more than a year to give you this award. But I hope you enjoy your medal. And expect a little theOtaku gift from me soon.
Thanks for participating!
Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/08/10 | Reply
Thank you xD Yeah, those pokemon people are crazy xD
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/07/10 | Reply
Oh this is greatXD
I can so relate to this:P I stopped watching Pokemon after they went crazy on all the new ones._. It was more than enough when there were 'only' 150XD LOL Nice job and good luck in the challenge, my fellow competitor^^
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/19/10 | Reply
Oh you think so, do you?
Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/19/10 | Reply
NUUUUU D:< LIES.
No you can't. You just broke the chain now. I WIN! >8D
:/ I could too.
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/18/10 | Reply
DO NOT! D8< I can keep this up forever you know.
Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/18/10 | Reply
I do!!! D8<
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/17/10 | Reply
YOU DO NOT SUCK!!
Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/14/10 | Reply
Thanks a lot xD
:0 Thank you Meghan! *hugs*
I can actually sing this with my Rockband microphone on the computer. The thing is... I suck at singing xD
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/12/10 | Reply
Nice one! I love it! It makes me really wish I had a recording studio, haha!
And people wonder why I never watch Pokemon anymore... Good job! Good luck!
Primadonna (Otaku Legend) | Posted 07/12/10 | Reply
ROFL that's hilarious! Good luck in the challenge!
Inspector (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/11/10 | Reply
:0 Thank you!
Why 12 though? xD
Thank you Lunari C:
Thank you 8D
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/10/10 | Reply
-chuckles- Oh my goodness Miss Chi that's wonderful! So funny.