hi there everyone! im so excited to finally begin writing my story. if it needs some work (which it most definitly does) dont hesitate to tell me. im open to all commments. the story that i wrote is about 5 books long. its about a girl named adira who finds this boy who is lost and needs to find his way back to his family. but he is no ordinary child. he is the empires prince. not only that but he has an entire demon army out to get him. he needs to get to his parents safely and the only person who can get him there is adira.
i still havnt edited the whole thing so it will take some time to post it, but your comments would be greatly appreicated. thanx for visiting!

treasure chapter one (page one) the lost prince

The woman was granted entrance. She walked across the castles main room feeling the cold stone under her bare feet. All eyes were fixed on her. She was a mysterious woman, an outcast amoung the others. All was quiet as she bowed before her king and queen, her long grey hair touching the floor. This proved to be difficult as she was very old. She got up smoothing out her long dress with slow, weak motions. The child was presented to her. He looked up at her from his casket. Such a small, innocent child. The time came for her to present her gift to the young prince. She layed her hand on his forehead, her green eyes glowing. Everyone in the room grew weak from the sudden force of power from the old woman. The queen rose from her seat and quickly moved in after her. The gaurds finally restarined the woman as the king ordered them to throw her in the cells. The queen looked into the eyes of her son. At that time he seemed unchanged but the womans gift was anything but noraml. It was going to change everything.
....12 years later.......

Fiction: 06/23/08 | Posted By: adirakazumi | 4 comments | Personal | Tags: