aww this was really cute and deep. you write really well. even i can't do that or anything half as good as that. lol. it was a nice poem. btw it's not feels in the part you said "feels and believes" it's "feelings and beliefs" but no big deal. just wanted to give you some help. but overall it's still. i liked it. good job!!
filo05
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/12/08 | Reply
wow, I really like it,you're right friendship means a lot^^ great job my friend!
Anime snow girl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/11/08 | Reply
Thank you my friend I wrote them wrong I'll check them now thank you ^^
sparkle 078
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 04/10/08 | Reply
aww this was really cute and deep. you write really well. even i can't do that or anything half as good as that. lol. it was a nice poem. btw it's not feels in the part you said "feels and believes" it's "feelings and beliefs" but no big deal. just wanted to give you some help. but overall it's still. i liked it. good job!!