Great story! You do a good job with getting to the point, yet not having it sound like you're rushing. I thought this was really interesting and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Check out some of my stuff sometime if you get the chance!
The descriptions are awsome, and the whole story is so addicting! Rishi loves it--much better then anything Rishi's gotten published. :D Rishi's surpirsed that no one's commented...then again, it is a 'personal' fanfic with multiple chapters. People are just too lazy. :P
wolf angel1
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/03/09 | Reply
Hi~lo! this was, at the best TOTALLY SUPER DUPER RULESSS!!! i look forward to R
eading the sequel!!
Madison2294
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
This was so vivid!! I saw the whole thing in my mind when I was reading it. Amazing job!!
mAcaBrEpRinCeZz
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
Great story! You do a good job with getting to the point, yet not having it sound like you're rushing. I thought this was really interesting and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Check out some of my stuff sometime if you get the chance!
*Rhiann*
KoInu kyan
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
Wow! Rishi is definatly impressed.
The descriptions are awsome, and the whole story is so addicting! Rishi loves it--much better then anything Rishi's gotten published. :D Rishi's surpirsed that no one's commented...then again, it is a 'personal' fanfic with multiple chapters. People are just too lazy. :P
Neways, neways, Rishi really likes this! Let's talk sometime 'bout our writing, kay?
Rishi~