I agree with Shin, man, this was intense. The conflict was great, as were Riley and Arthur's interactions. I'm totally jealous of your amazing action-writing skills - dialogue and characterization is my forte, but when I try to write action, it's totally awkward. I could learn quite a bit from you. :D
Man, I was breathless as I was reading this. Quite the visceral, well-paced story you have here. I'm jealous; I totally could not write action like this. I always get confused when I try lol.
NightBeck
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 08/05/08 | Reply
I agree with Shin, man, this was intense. The conflict was great, as were Riley and Arthur's interactions. I'm totally jealous of your amazing action-writing skills - dialogue and characterization is my forte, but when I try to write action, it's totally awkward. I could learn quite a bit from you. :D
Shinmaru
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 08/04/08 | Reply
Man, I was breathless as I was reading this. Quite the visceral, well-paced story you have here. I'm jealous; I totally could not write action like this. I always get confused when I try lol.
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