First off before I start the poem, I'd like to be very tedious for a mintue. I would like to express my feelings on the poem I wrote, admittably it could be better, but I am not use to writing about these kind of things. Soplease criticize nicely! And please take the poem seriously, stupid comments will recieve a strongly worded message. Thanks and enjoy! (please note all of the words are different poems mixed as one)

Title : Bullies,lies, and stories.

By day light you don't want to wake,
Utering excuses not to go to school.
Letting you rfake illness hide your tears and fear,
Letting your mother or father dissmiss the agony of your glare as a failed attempt at getting out of school.
I wonder what your thinking as you walk down the hall,
Everyone staring, none can hear your fall.
Slipping, praying, glancing past, the bully in the classroom.

Letting your heart speed up only enough to get you into the school without crying.
I wonder why you cover up the scars.
Everyone asked, but you don't tell.
Scars, you hide the knife so well.

Anxiouse and scared,
Nestled tight in your own hollow shell,
Don't know anyone, because they don't know you.

Staring nervously around, but keeping head low to the ground
Teatering on the edge of screams,
Oh, how afraid you are of home.
Running away will be so tough, it's all you've ever know.
I wonder what your thinking.
Everyone wonders but you hide every bruise.
So sad, the beatings you hide.

In case your wondering, the first is for a person who faces a bully, a girl who is emo, and a child who is being abused by her parents.

Sad, I know, but I was listening to a song (alyssa lies) and came up with it.
Please comment!!

Sparkllingwave~~~~~~~~~~~~

Life: 10/08/08 | Posted By: sparklingwave | 2 comments