This is a world for the story I'm writing called "See Homunculus Me". It's about me (Sin), a girl who is a homunculus and one minute she has slaves the next she is a slave herself. She befriends Ren and Leiko two new homunculus(es?). Ren is Greedsdoll and Leiko is...well..she keeps forgetting her password but she's FoxDemon9.0 and many others. I hope you like my story. Please read and review and if you have a fanfiction.net site also read and review it on there. I'll update that one more probably, the link is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4098308/1/See_Homunculus_Me

Love lots,
Lil Devil4life & Geikido

Chapter 1

(Narrator) The buildings where burned to the ground or still in contact just not really in good shape. The doors to the messed up buildings had huge crystals in front of them, blocking intruders. There were rocks that when the people in worn out clothes would touch they would be shocked; some hands would turn crispy and black. A girl about 11 sat in a chair; golden edges but a black cushion. She had her feet over a chair arm: the strange thing was, her right arm and left leg where one color and her left arm and right leg where a different skin; on her left foot she had a red sign of a snake eating it’s own tail with the Star of David in the center and wings on each side; she wore a purple skirt that went to just above her knees with shorts under; a purple shirt that had no sleeves, went over most of her neck, and showed her stomach. On her stomach and right arm she had writing that couldn’t be read, almost like a strange, written tattoo. It said things about the Devil and Hell. She had black hair: black bangs formed around her eyes jagged at the bottom; her hair went to her waist, at the jagged parts it’s died purple. On her right foot she had a piece of purple cloth tied around her ankle and where the heel and foot start to meet, showing most of her foot and heel; on her left wrist she wore a purple piece of cloth as well, tied around her arm starting at her wrist ending just before the bend on her elbow. A little boy around 10 came up to her, “Leader, I’ve cleaned everything you asked. Now may I bathe?” “NO! What’s the point of having slaves if they can just do whatever!?” She threw him to the ground, leaving the chair to a building roof. A boy about her age looking just like her but with black clothes and the arms are different stepped behind her. “Come with me.” He hit her in the back of her head, knocking her out and freeing everyone of her slaves as if she would never return. The girl woke up on a black couch in a room with red walls and pictures of fire and the devil everywhere, “Where am I?” A woman in a black dress walked up the girl and sat down by her, “Hello, my name is Sloth. Let me introduce you to everyone. The girl in the black dress with the long hair and gloves is Lust. The big one is Gluttony. The little boy you meet before is Wrath, the one on the stairs is Envy, the old one is Pride, and the one with the beer bottle is Greed.” “Now,” Lust said, “we told you our names. Now we must know your name.” She froze; what to say? She didn’t know plus she was to afraid! “M-m-my name is…” It was the longest 2 seconds of her life with all these strange new people looking right at her, “Sin.”
(Sin) The boy, Wrath I think it was, came over to me and I wanted to hit him back but he just stuck out his hand, “Come on! I’ll show you your room then we have to get to sleep because it’s a rule.” He showed me my room; all red and yellow. It had so much stuff!. Wrath soon left and I was alone again. My head was spinning. So many new things and everything was just too confusing. I went over to the yellow puffy bed and layed down. I wanted to forget everything and die-if that was possible for a homunculus. I put my face in the pillow and breathed slowly for a few minutes and then I drifted off to sleep.

End