This is not edited, that's why it sucks. I hope you can give me some information of any kind.
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Kiba X Shino
By: Ruckles
The sun was setting behind the trees right outside of the village. I just stepped out of the grocery store getting a ton of dog food for the fifteen dogs that live within my house. I groaned, “Damn it, all of these bags are heavy, and the sun’s going down.” I looked down at my side, where my dog, Akamaru looked up at me whimpering. “I’m sorry Akamaru. I think our walk will have to pass for tonight.”
The sun deepened into the horizon. Akamaru barked and leaped onto my head. “Hey,” I yelled, “Akamaru!” I began to stagger back. I lost my balance than began to fall. Akamaru jumped off of my head for safety. All of the food began to fly in the air.
Suddenly, someone – still falling straight to the ground, caught me. All of the bags crashed to the ground, ripping, tearing, and spilling. Ignoring those for the moment being, I flipped my head around to see my comrade, Shino Aburame.
“S-Shino?” I staggered. My heart was racing a mile a minute. Shino was the one that I held much love for and he was holding me!
“Someone’s a little clumsy tonight,” he commented.
“I’m sorry, if Akamaru wouldn’t have-“ I ended my sentence by not seeing Akamaru anywhere.
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There you go. Once again, please give me addvice and/or mistakes I've made on it so far. I'd thank you for that.
-Ruckles
