World Review Format (clubs/role plays)

(NOTE: I know that some of the links don't work. And I'm sorry to say that this is no longer a rp ;0;)

Number of Members: 10 so far

Summery: This is a roleplay world based on the Vocaloid song, "Alice of Human Sacrifice" which I prefer to shorten to AHS.

Here, you are either an ALICE or a RABBIT (Yes, they are suppose to be spelled in caps.) ALICEs are not only females, but also males caught in the dream world of Wonderland. There are four types, who live in 4 different areas of Wonderland, unable to cross into another section with one exception. They are either a red ALICE (brave and courageous, but warlike and love to fight), blue ALICE (love to sing, dance, draw, etc to entertain others, but their art is strange and untruthful, and influences others into becoming almost as twisted as themselves), green ALICE (very proud and good looking, often seduce people around them. In return for their beautiful appearances, they gain the ability to see when anyone but another ALICE is going to die), or a yellow ALICE (more innocent and curious, they normally, but not always, come in pairs, meaning that two people make up one ALICE. They alone can travel between the different parts of Wonderland through doors). RABBITS are the people in the real world working to safe them from their dream state.

Personal Opinion: So far, it's a good role play and the posts seem to be good. The plot is being set into motion and most members seem to be exited for the rp to start. Now, I'm not the leader or anything, but I'm just a little worried about what will happen once they get to the ALICE realm. I guess only time will tell.

Starting Date: 8/14/10 so it still just recently started.

Number of Pages: 6; like I said, this rp is just starting.

Based off of or Personal: It's based off the song by Vococoid Alice of Human Sacrifice, and the manga Doubt.

Interesting Notes:

That ALICE/RABBIT are spelled in caps.
The point systems name is cool but unusual. It's fitting though.
Each RABBIT has some kind of object.
Each RABBIT has a bar code to let them move around.

Recommend To: Anyone basically.

Age Ranking: Well, I can't say for sure, but a 13-14+??? I'm not sure if there is swearing/blood/gore/violence/etc. But thats most that I can think off so if you don't mind it, than no age ranking.

Recommends to Make it Better:
Linking the rules and profiles. Maybe making the background more...Different? It's just a normal set background and not very creative. Though it is fitting, a lot of worlds have it. Centering the picture.(<-yes you can do that) Maybe taking Places and Objects out of the intro and normal posting them than linking it somewhere because the intro is kind of long (but I can't say much about it cause all my intros are usually long...)