YAY!!!!!!!! AWWW!! It was so sweet at the end!! Makes me wanna draw a picture of winry leaning on Edward in a bus!! I just might do that!! Okay hurry up with the next chapter!! Can't wait for the pary scene!!
Last edited by hugmeimcute at 10:21:46 PM EDT on June 22, 2009.
....Im like that too! Wheres the fourth page? I gonna cry!You know since your making winry jelaous you should make ed jelaous too! You should make russel like winry! Oh wait you have roy for that! Aww Im just so much of a RoyXriza fan that I can't see him with winry! (like I would want to see a grown man and a teenage girl together) I don't know! Well it is your story. I wonder why no one has ever thought to make a russelXwinry anything! I wonder how that would work out...Oh well ed is better with winry any way!!
yes... it's a lot more interesting!! I love how you made winry hate rose! rose is a slut that should die alone!! I mean she was pregnant when she met ed!! I think...... Any way finish it now!!! PPPLLLLLEEEAASSSEEEEE!!! that is all.
FINISH THIS!!!! this is an order!!! this is way to awesome,cute, and funny not to be finished!! plz im begging this is the coolest story ever!! better than twilight!! okay maybe not that good but it sure as hell is close!!!
That was good! I liked it. I like the way you put the "adults" in as other high school students. I didn't always know what was going on-I didn't recognize all those names- but the chemistry between Ed and Winry is obvious. Keep it up!
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!! THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I REALLY GET INTO THE STORY AND I CAN IMAGINE IT X3 I LOVE THIS!!! PLEASE CONTINUE MORE X3 I DONT MIND ROYxWInry its flirting its a perfect character and Ed is really funny, awww i love this i dont know what other words to say more fabulous very very interesting XD
Alazne Chan
Title: Otakuite | Posted 11/07/09 | Reply
I loved this! You're a really good writer! You should continue! ^_^b
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 10/13/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
well your certainly taking your time on this...(add sarcastic tone here)......HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 08/25/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
HURRY UP!!!!!! I GETTING TIRED OF WAITING!!!!!!!
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 08/11/09 | Reply
@Vivene:
thank you very much!
Vivene
Title: Otakuite | Posted 08/11/09 | Reply
I loved your story. And the whole alchemy brigade in high school.....wowwww that is super awesome. Keep up the good work.
Last edited by Vivene at 5:49:34 AM EDT on August 11, 2009.
killjill
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 07/15/09 | Reply
LOL! the whole scenery of the going on top of a childhood friend kind of thing
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 07/10/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
Yay! The party scene is finally here!!! Party, Party, come and join us!! :)
Last edited by hugmeimcute at 2:02:06 PM EDT on July 13, 2009.
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 07/03/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
Kay thanks and hurrry up!!^^
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/23/09 | Reply
@hugmeimcute:
lol Ok! If you do end up drawing that I'll definatly have to take a look!
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/22/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
YAY!!!!!!!! AWWW!! It was so sweet at the end!! Makes me wanna draw a picture of winry leaning on Edward in a bus!! I just might do that!! Okay hurry up with the next chapter!! Can't wait for the pary scene!!
Last edited by hugmeimcute at 10:21:46 PM EDT on June 22, 2009.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/21/09 | Reply
@hugmeimcute:
Gosh, I'm sorry it took me so long to update! D:
well, here's chapter 4!
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
Well you should! Hurry up I've waiting for a week now!!
Your biggest fan Hugme-chan!!
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/10/09 | Reply
@hugmeimcute:
The fourth page is coming soon. ^^ Yeah I'm thinking about throwing Russle into the mix somehow, but we'll just have to wait and see. lol
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/10/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
....Im like that too!
Wheres the fourth page? I gonna cry!You know since your making winry jelaous you should make ed jelaous too! You should make russel like winry! Oh wait you have roy for that! Aww Im just so much of a RoyXriza fan that I can't see him with winry! (like I would want to see a grown man and a teenage girl together) I don't know! Well it is your story. I wonder why no one has ever thought to make a russelXwinry anything! I wonder how that would work out...Oh well ed is better with winry any way!!
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/09/09 | Reply
@hugmeimcute:
lol yes I hate Rose so I just had to make Winry hate her. xD Thats just how I am....
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/09/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
yes... it's a lot more interesting!! I love how you made winry hate rose! rose is a slut that should die alone!! I mean she was pregnant when she met ed!! I think...... Any way finish it now!!! PPPLLLLLEEEAASSSEEEEE!!! that is all.
al76259
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 06/02/09 | Reply
this is good right more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Last edited by al76259 at 3:53:19 PM EDT on June 6, 2009.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/01/09 | Reply
@fsnLover:
Really? Thank you! I'm very glad you like it
fsnLover
Title: Otakuite | Posted 06/01/09 | Reply
men you sure can make a very very good story i was judt in the second paragraph an i was really amazed
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/31/09 | Reply
@hugmeimcute:
lol ok ok I will finish it! xD I'm glad you like it that much! Almost as good as Twilight is really good! Are you sure it's that good? lol
hugmeimcute
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 05/30/09 | Reply
FINISH THIS!!!! this is an order!!! this is way to awesome,cute, and funny not to be finished!! plz im begging this is the coolest story ever!! better than twilight!! okay maybe not that good but it sure as hell is close!!!
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/14/09 | Reply
@wolfee1005:
no problem ^^
wolfee1005
Title: Otakuite | Posted 05/14/09 | Reply
@ChibiEdoGirl:
Oh, Thank you.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/13/09 | Reply
@wolfee1005:
Thank you! Oh I love your avatar btw. Fai rocks xD
wolfee1005
Title: Otakuite | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
You really have a talent.
GOOD, GOOD, I really love the story.
Continue what you're doing.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/07/09 | Reply
@Kyubi Elric:
Aww thank you so much! It's people like you who comment who really inspire me to keep writing. Thank you, I'm so glad you like this!
Kyubi Elric
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 05/06/09 | Reply
I really liked this story!!! You have alot of talent for writing and I hope to see more from you. You're a great writer.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 05/04/09 | Reply
@:
um well....I guess we can say it's based in our word? I don't realy know, i guess I didn't think that one through...^^"
al76259
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 04/23/09 | Reply
it is a good story right more!!!!!!!! Xd
Last edited by al76259 at 9:10:09 PM EDT on May 6, 2009.
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/20/09 | Reply
@cherrichan13:
lol thanks I'm glad you liked it! If you need me to explain anything feel free to ask!
cherrichan13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/20/09 | Reply
That was good! I liked it. I like the way you put the "adults" in as other high school students. I didn't always know what was going on-I didn't recognize all those names- but the chemistry between Ed and Winry is obvious. Keep it up!
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/19/09 | Reply
yay! xD I'm surprised it published so fast!
nica624
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/19/09 | Reply
oh wow that was fast, it was published at once, very nice congrats :3
ChibiEdoGirl
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/02/09 | Reply
@nica624:
Aw thanks so much! I'll be sure to continue it! *hugs* TAHNK YOU!
nica624
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/01/09 | Reply