Hey! This is a story I'm writing about orphans. My characters:
Cookie- Me
Carmel- Narutosdemon001
Chocolate- hatakexkakashi
Cherry- Greedsdoll
Now a picture I found. No, my characters do not look like this but I thought it was cute and I just added the characters names.
Please enjoy my story and check to see when a new chapter is in. Also you can pm me and give me some ideas for my story if you have any good ones.
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A video for my friend Narutosdemon001/Carmel/Lizzy w/e you wanna call her. Also this can go out to my other friends too. No you don't have to watch but you can if you want.
Cherry stood up at the end of the big table with a worried look on her face, “um, breakfast will be a few minutes late.”
Every chair was filled but one tattered chair by the end of the table. All but two faces were new to Cookie. She looked around searching for her roommate. Carmel hadn’t been in the room all night which made a few of the girls nervous. Why are they so nervous, Cookie wondered, they didn’t even seem to care about Carmel at all last night…
There was a loud crash at the top of the stairs and no one seemed to move except Cookie. “Cherry…was that Carmel?”
Cherry didn’t look at her. She kept looking forward her expression not changing at all. Cookie got up and started walking to the stairs when Cherry grabbed her arm, “Carmel’s not social. She hates her life and she knows no one wants her. That’s why she’s not all happy about ever getting adopted. She’s pretty much lived here her whole life. Except for people adopting her for a week or two then bringing her back.”
Cookie didn’t move
**COOKIE’S POINT OF VIEW!!**
“When did this all start?”
“When did what start?” Cherry looked like she didn’t understand but I figured she did.
“When did she come here? And why?”
Chocolate stood up and came over and grabbed my elbow, even though my wrist was still being held by Cherry. “Cher let go. I’ll explain everything.”
Okay so I know knew that Cherry had a nickname pronounced like chair…interesting. “Please just someone explain.”
Cherry let go of my wrist and walked back to her chair and then Chocolate let go of my elbow, trusting me…maybe. “Look Cook,” she hesitated-I almost when crazy when she said Cook though. It’s been one day and I have a nickname. “Carmel was about one or two when she came here. She came here because her father abused her mother, do you know what abused means?”
“Look, I may be nine but I do know what abused means. Beat up and hurt.”
She nodded, “so he abused Carmel’s mom and Carmel watched every day. He hurt Carmel once or twice but not a lot. He beat her mom so much one night he killed her. Someone saw and called 911. Carmel was taken away from her dad and it was very hard for her because she was just one and there was nothing she could do about it.”
I must have started crying because Chocolate reached out her hand and wiped my cheeks.
“Yeah it’s sad. She’s never really been adopted because she’s so strong and acts rude to the father-figure that adopts her.”
I heard sobbing behind me so I turned around and Carmel was on the bottom steps covered in dust with tears rolling down her cheeks. I went over and sat by her and got some of the dust of her back and arms and then I hugged her. She didn’t seem to mind right now, she hugged back. Chocolate came over and joined the hug.
Though some of what I’ve heard about today was sad and yesterday few were nice to me…I think I like this orphanage. The first one I’ve hugged anyone, the first one to give me a nickname, the first one with people that talk to the little one, and the first one I actually get along with at least one person.
If you all wanna know about chapter 2 then you can read this, if you want it all to be a surpise then don't read.
Most/all of chapter 2 (haha, its not finished yet) is about Carmel's past and why being adopted isn't a good thing. I hope you all liked chapter 1! ^_^
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OMG its David Cook! ^_^ I dunno if I like David Cook more or the other one...
Hey sry I've had this site up forever and never put up chapter 1! I've had it done for a few days but I kept forgetting! ^-^'
Chapter 1
“Hello?” A small girl stepped inside a big, dark building. “Is anyone here?”
“Yeah. What room you in?” The girl was tall and had blonde hair to her shoulders with blue tips.
“Um…room…208.” The girl answered. “Do you help run this place?”
“No, well, kind of. I don’t own this place I live here. I’ve lived here my whole life and so everyone listens to me. My name’s Cherry by the way. I feel sorry for ya. You share a room with Carmel and she’s not too good with sharing.” Cherry started walking up the stairs in baggy pants and a baggy tee.
The other followed her up. “My name’s Cookie…if you care.”
“Yeah, I don’t care. Carmel won’t care either and she doesn’t care for talking.” She stopped in front of a room with the numbers ‘208’ coming off. “Breakfast is at 7, miss it and you don’t eat till noon with is lunch. Dinner is at 6. Lights out by 9.” Cherry turned and kept walking down the hall.
The door handle was bent and locked? What’s with this? Cookie thought. She shook her head and her light brown hair twirled around her face.
Another girl with blonde hair walked out of a room a few doors down. She was taller than Cookie but a bit shorter than Cherry. She wore a light blue tank top and black shorts.
“Um…ma’am. Could you help me?”
The girl turned and stared at Cookie. After a minute she started towards her, “my names Chocolate so don’t call me ma’am and what do you need?” She looked at the door, “Carmel doesn’t like visitors.”
“Okay, hi Chocolate and sorry ‘bout that. My name is Cookie and I was assigned this room.”
“Oh.” Chocolate put her hands on Cookie’s shoulders and moved her to the side. She grabbed the handle, turned it, and kicked the door swinging it wide open. “Carmel broke to doors so it’s hard to open.” She smiled and walked towards the end of the hall.
Wonder what’s down there…maybe she’s going to see Cherry or something…maybe I can ask Carmel.
She walked into the room and saw a girl with black hair in the corner. “Go away, I have nothing in my room.” And the girl was right. Everything in her room was cleared out for some reason. She didn’t even have a bed.
Cookie walked over to her and bent down beside her, “my name is Cookie. I’m supposed to share this room with Carmel…are you her?”
The girl looked up, “yes that’s me. And NO!” She stood up so fast that Cookie lost her balance and almost fell over but instead Carmel grabbed her arm and threw her outside, slamming the door behind.
Cherry was beside the door and went straight into action. “Car dammit open the door!” Cherry bust the door open instead and then closed it behind her.
~~Minutes pass~~
Carmel comes out of the room still mad. “Sorry, I didn’t want a roommate and I even told the owners. Stay if you like, I was ‘adopted’ anyways.”
“That’s great isn’t it?” Cookie said glancing in between Cherry and Carmel.
Cherry put a hand on Cookie’s shoulder, “not for Carmel.” Then she walked away down the stairs.
