Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/28/09 | Reply
Lol I'm glad. Especially that you like it better than the Momiji one...I'm more concerned about being able to create my own story than fanfiction anyway. I'm glad you caught those "hidden truths"...little kids know more than other people seem to realize And you're doing a great jobs describing, thanks! Hugs for you.
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/28/09 | Reply
This is amazing! I want to describe it better, but I can't do it very well. Bare with me. It's filled to the brim with real life, hidden truths about people. The ending and his comment after he receives the heart are my favorite parts. I love how you attached love to the physical heart, but it's also done in an unique way. I might like this one better than Momoji's story.