OMG...>< I need to get better titles, these are just getting pathetic....T^T
WELL!!! This is Troublesum Shika's entry!!! It's a drama!! And it's very well written!!! ^0^
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NAME: Jaysin Ren Mater
Hair Color: Silver (Dyed)
Eye Color: Bright light Blue
Age: 15
Height: 5’ 11”
Grade: 9, 99% Average (A+)
Best Class: Math
Favorite Class: Language Arts/English
Background: English/British
Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada
Likes: Music, Skateboarding, His Red Headphones, baggy cargo pants, Appreciation
Dislikes: Everyone around him, His parents, Discriminators, Society
Interests/Hobbies: Writing, Skateboarding, all types of arts, Drumming
Past: “My Life… hasn’t exactly been easy. Since the beginning people have either ignored me, Manipulated me, Betrayed me, or pretended they loved me. My Mother Decided she wanted to get rid of me when she decided I was finished nursing, I Was not even a full year old when she just gave me away. I Was adopted by a porn star who needed an accessory to tell people “see!? I AM responsible.”, Or at least that’s what she said. I Was put into school early so that she wouldn’t have to work as hard. I started grade 1 when I was 5, That’s early here. The woman said she hated me, but not enough to betray me and put me back on the street, And I Knew it was the truth. My “mother” had been through quite a bit in her past, as well. A lot of betrayal. I Was never truly ‘Betrayed’ until I Was 8 in grade 4, When I finally made a friend, At least that’s what I Thought she was. She and I Became so close that we decided to date, yeah yeah don’t bitch at me for that. I Know we were too young, but we didn’t care about that. She was cheating on me with the most popular guy in the class. The betrayals didn’t end there, no, no, I made a lot of friends in the short time I’ve been alive. They’ve all betrayed me one way or another. The only real friend I’ve ever had committed suicide because of his mother. I Remember being at his house, just listening to the fighting from everyone… I’m not surprised he did that. I wouldn’t have been able to stand it, either. I Just wish he didn’t take the easy way out. I’ve been thinking about that myself… but there are so many things that I’ve never experienced yet… I Guess I’ll just have to wait, then… Right?”
Main Personality traits: Pessimistic, emotional.
This imoutochan's entry. I really like it! Especially the hair!! ^_^
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NAME: Skela Tin
Age: 16
Hair Color: Bone White
Eye Color(s): Blue and Black
Height: 5’7
When Skela Tin was born, everyone noticed that she held an unhealthy amount of power in her left eye. To conceal this power, they wrapped a seal that resembled a black scarf around her left eye and hid her away in an asylum about 5 miles outside of her hometown.
There she lived until she was 15, when a freak accident happened and the asylum burned down to the ground. Skela Tin was the only survivor. Unfortunately she lost a good amount of her memory, including her name. Noticing her “bone white” hair she deemed herself Skela Tin. Unknown to Skela, many people had sought to find the girl with the “bone white” hair to steal her power that she held in her left eye. About a year of her escape, a group of such people found her and managed to damage her left eye, causing it to turn death black. Seeing this, they figured they had drained her of her power. Before leaving her to die they told her of her origin and why she couldn’t remember anything.
Angry and confused, Skela vows to get revenge on those who destroyed her left eye and left her half blind. Though thought to die from severe blood loss, she lives and begins her journey of revenge…
More info about the pic: the panel with the black BG is before the fire singed her hair and melted her handcuffs. The one with the blue BG is after she was attacked and lost the color/power in her left eye >_0
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That's really cool! I like how your character is different from the average OC. She doesn't have an almighty super power, she has to work for hers!!! ^^
w0Ot! ^^
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MWAHAHAH!!! My titles just keep getting better and better!!! ^0^
This is wolfshadowlurker's entry. She actually turned in the written part a while back, but now she just sent me the picture! ^^
HERE IT IS!! *drum roll*
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Name: Delta Riviera Zarana Wulfsong
to see it, click here (the file isn't in JPEG format)
She is six years old, has big green eyes with triangles over them, tan bangs and a cowlick, lavendar extensions, the back of her head is bushy spiky black hair, she has tan wolf ears and a tail, a teardrop jewel necklace, a red dog collar, a ripped blue trenchcoat-style no-sleeve shirt, lace sleeves, a thick checkered black and white belt, and a lavendar skirt, she wears no shoes.
She is the outcast of Kajimizu Pack because of her human form, her mother Zarana is dead and considered a hero by the pack, her father was taken away from her at birth, his name is Samson, and he thinks she's dead. Delta is Earth and Water element. She runs away from Kajimizu Pack and forms the Eiyu Yasei tribe with Torn Tiger, 8, ZM043, unknown, Stripe a winged cat fairy, unknown, and Charles and Maria, twins who have opposite elements. They are currently on a mission to destroy a huge demon.
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It's a great picture! ^^ I really enjoyed reading the story as well!! ^0^
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Lol. I kinda went overboard on that title...><
I just really like the way her entry turned out. ^^
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NAME:Okihi Uchiha/Hatake (Maiden/Married name)
So...this is extremely long, but you can read it if you want to.
A few things I changed. Anko's a little younger then she originally is, and Kakashi doesn't die.
Please keep in mind there are still a few kinks. This was written really fast and I didn't pay attention ot a lot of stuff. ^^'
When Okihi was born, her sharingan was active. Besides the three tomoe red-eyes the baby girl possessed, when her mother said “Why, She’s beautiful!” using that copy technique, she was able to repeat “beautiful” only a few minutes old. It was a surprising and just as dangerous aspect of the Uchiha clan. Fugaku, her father, didn’t know what to expect. Her knew it was probably in the village’s and family’s best concern to kill her right away. Mikoto, her mother, knew that was wrong, and she was not about to give up her child that easily. She knew her husband meant well but instead she made a deal. That she would never step outside or cease to exist. It was the beginning of Okihi’s imprisonment. She was kept a secret for a long time, they aimed for her entire life. The Hokage ordered the medics that delivered her to keep quiet. Knowing that the child’s life was at stake they agreed. She was able to walk when she was two months old, by watching her mother. And speak perfect Japanese, at five months. They didn’t keep their reasons for locking her in the house from her, she knew why she was sentenced to live like that for the village people, and she respected it.
Medical problems started early for her. Her skin stopped producing pigment, she developed a heart syndrome, and her immune system lacked sufficient defenses, resulting in by merely catching a cold (somehow) it could have been fatal. Her existence was exposed to another person, Tsunade.
When she was four she thought about the work her father did, and how he always bragged about what an honor it was to be a shinobi. She decided, for him, she would become and excellent shinobi. But with her fathers objection to her wants, and her mother worry towering over, the only person she could really depend on making her a shinobi was the Hokage himself. He thought it was a wonderful idea. Her father argued that she was dangerous, with sharingan such as that, that didn’t even take away her eye sight was a bad sign. And her mother, worried it’d kill her, for she was already not in the best shape. But the Hokage disagreed, and to her joy, she was enrolled with secret classes. She became a genin off the bat. And two years later, she was an elite jounin.
She insisted on still being taught. For she was a fast learner and already a few steps ahead of everyone (more like a few years). She was quickly becoming the best ninja in the village, at only six years of age, and still a secret. In this time, when she turned seven, Itachi, her little brother was born. Having waited a while her parents were cautious that another child might be like her, but they took the chance. Itachi was her first company, and Okihi was the best older sister anyone could hope for. For her mother as a role model, and all the time during the day (she trained in the fields at night), Itachi had a permanent teacher and caretaker. She was a natural.
The hokage put her under Orochimaru a few years later after teaching her under himself. Although he already had a student, Anko, under his teachings he agreed to teach the Uchiha. Although most of the time they had separate sessions, at times Anko and Okihi we put together as a two man team. Anko was jealous, thick, and full of spite for her. She’d pick on her, and tease her, make fun of her. She’d do things and Okihi would let her, only to come back and smile and share her lunch. Okihi was always kind to Anko, and only wanted to be her friend, for she was the only kid her age she knew and she respected Anko. Not even a year later, Orochimaru became more cold towards Okihi, giving Anko more attention and training. She thought she understood, that she was the one that intruded on their bond. They were together first, and when he constantly called her out of missions or told her to go with the black ops team, she knew they were only pushing her away. Not even a year later Orochimaru resigned as her teacher. He gave no reason, and the hokage couldn’t figure out why he had abandoned her.
During that time when Okihi was home alone there was a banging at her door. She had become more daring at that age. And she opened it. Obito Uchiha ran in and closed the door while his mother yelled frantically for him. He introduced himself, and they were friends ever since. Again her mother defended her relationship with Obito from her father. And Obito was allowed to visit her from then on. Knowing of her situation, he’d bring flowers, small animals, magazines and other strange things for her (and Itachi, who just reaped the benefits of free junk food). When Okihi explained how she was turned down by her sensei, Obito suggested his sensei teach her. Without the consent from the hokage, the yellow flash became her mentor for whenever Orochimaru denied her presence. Obito even brought Rin one morning to meet her. She and Rin became good friends. She was never able to meet the other member of Obito’s team though, because he absolutely refused to be late to training. Obito spoke fondly yet crudely about him, and she knew they must’ve been very good friends.
The day before the mission started where Obito’s death took place, he came to see Okihi about it. She was more excited then him about it. He really didn’t want to go, but she encouraged him like it was herself going on such a mission. She was so happy for him, and really wanted him to go. A few days later when she heard of his death, she completely blamed herself for it. She cried, and cried. The guilt was as much as if it were she who killed him. Her only friend, her best friend. And it was all her fault. When she looked in the mirror to tend her face, there was a pair of red mongekyou sharingans staring back at her.
She practiced with the new sharingan. Finding new ways to use it. When her father saw it, he was furious. He wanted to kill her then and there. They argued, she cried. She took off her shinobi forehead protector and threw it to the ground, vowing to never wear such a disgrace again. At this point she had already reached sannin level, although she refused to acknowledge that title.
A few months later, Sasuke was born.
Around this time as well, she was sent to Suna to help defeat the Shukaku and help place him in the body of the Kazekage’s son, Gaara. They had it retained but they needed someone with more experience. Jiraiya and Tsunade both agreed it was Okihi they needed. And so she went. They were already in a mess when she arrived, and she did her best to organize and fix things they had miscalculated. With her help, they were able to save little Gaara’s life. After the death of his mother, she grew a rather fond liking to baby Gaara. She’d hold him, tease him with her fingers, and tell him how awesome he was going to be in the future. The kazekage didn’t like how she was encouraging him, nor did he like how attached she was growing to him. She’d come for the next few years and visit him, until the kazekage forbade it. She was banned from Suna, and blamed for the future destruction Gaara caused, because they claimed it was because of her “influence”. When really her influence and friendship was the best thing he had at that time. And it was because it was taken away from him, that everything fell apart.
With Orochimaru and the Yellow Flash torn from her life, the hokage put her under the teachings of Jiraiya. He warned her the day she was assigned that he was going to put her with another sensei when she turned sixteen. At twelve years old, she didn’t quite know why. The hokage said she’d figure it out. And she did. When she turned sixteen she gladly went under the teachings/protection of Tsunade. Okihi continued to teach her younger siblings the way of a shinobi in her circumstances. She trained with them at night, in the basement, and even went on sibling missions with Itachi every once in a while. Although she had been going on A and S ranked missions since she was six, the E and D ranked ones her brothers were sent on created a sort of missed childhood. How she had grown up a little too fast for her realization.
At twenty years of age, her entire life changed.
Madara and Itachi began to massacre the clan. Okihi knew she had to stop them. But at that point in her life, she was on the same level of the ninja arts as Madara. He kept her occupied as Itachi did the killing. The emotional drain of trying to save her family and stopping too highly skilled ninjas weakened her. They threatened her for the last time. That if she didn’t stop, they’d kill Sasuke along with everyone else.She stilled tried saving everyone else, but when Sasuke was the only one left, she surrendered. They stabbed her in the neck. Gasping and crawling, Itachi and Madara left her for the dead. Luckily, with Tsunade’s teachings, she was able to heal herself. She couldn’t face Sasuke like that, so she decided to remain hidden and continue her self imprisonment. The hokage, Tsunade and Jiraiya objected to her choice, but they realized it was probably for the best. From then on if she went on a mission, they were solo. She became editor in chief for Jiraiya’s romance novels, Tsunade’s paper organizer, and visited the memorial stone every moment she could. Usually in the rain.
And it was one rainy morning at the memorial stone where she met him, Kakashi Hatake. Kakashi unfortunately didn’t know what to expect. When he was younger Obito wasn’t allowed to tell him her name, and a strange, Uchiha crest bearing woman at the memorial stone with her sharingan activated wasn’t a comforting sign to him. They were both mixed up. For either had a strange feeling about the other. And despite the awkward situation, soon became very good friends…very good friends. Okihi without much thought, almost completely banished her prison life. She was reunited with her brother, who in all the world was happy to see her alive and well. From there she met most of Konoha. Including Kurenai, Hinata, Shino, Kiba, Akamaru, Asuma, Ino, Chouji, Shikamaru, Konohamaru, Ebisu, and others, such as Neji, Lee, Tenten and their sensei, Gai. Who, unfortunately admitted and obsessed over his love for her and her stunning beauty. But she was already in love with someone else.
Her mansion burns down without a known cause. Kakashi volunteers to share his apartment with her, she agrees to stay until she can find her own apartment. From there she starts to work with Team seven consisting of her little brother, Sakura Haruno and Naruto Uzumaki. Despite anyone’s differences, Okihi was a caring, and almost motherly figure to all the genin. She became quite popular in the little time she was around.
After a couple of months, the hokage assigns her a required mission. And she’s sent to go with the ANBU for three years recording the Akatsuki’s where abouts and analyzing their members. Okihi had long denied becoming a black op almost her entire life, but this time, she was forced. With heavy hearts Okihi left her family both blood and extended to leave. It was extremely hard on Kakashi, and Okihi and Sakura wrote letters back and forth to keep each other updated.
During the chuunin exams, Okihi’s goes away to see her brother fight, but finds more then what she expected. A familiar chakra vibe, one from a former sensei. She stays for the forest of death watching orochimau’s move, just in case. And she was happily able to see Gaara again who was surprised but just as glad to see her. As was Temari and Kankuro.
At the final chuunin exam, where the hokagewas fighting Orochimaru, She ran to help, but the 3rd said for her not to interfere, for it was his fight. So with heavy eyes and hearts everyone watched the 3rd die anyway. She went back to her normal ANBU team and duties when she was suddenly informed Itachi Uchiha and Kisame were in the village. Gai, Asuma and Kurenai were fighting them but she knew if anyone had an advantage against her brother it was her. She arrived and entered the mongekyou sharingan a few milliseconds after Kakashi had been brought into his world. She blocked the stab from Itachi, harming herself more then she would realize. With Kakashi knocked out, Itachi and Kisame disappeared to find Naruto. Okihi wasn’t even able to stay with Kakashi for him to wake up before the ANBU ordered her back again.
Her ANBU captain informed her she was going to sent on a classified, private mission solo. She was suppose to disguise herself as someone who wanted to enter the Akatsuki. Her captain had said it was secret, and only to find out inside information, where Okihi was the only person they could imagine having a chance of getting in and getting out alive.
Little did she know, her “captain” was an Orochimaru follower trying to eliminate her. But Okihi couldn’t defy her orders, for she knew she could be cast out as a traitor by not following the ANBU’s orders.
Problem was, her captain kept it entirely secret, not even the hokage knew she had gone to Akatsuki on a innocent notion. And so rumor soon spread over the village that Okihi Uchiha had turned to the Akatsuki. She disguised herself by wrapping a Konoha headband around her eyes, making her completely blind for the year or two she was there. Itachi, never actually being evil in the first place, made no notion to her.
When Okihi finally made it out of the Akatsuki, she returned to Konoha, only to be tied up with the most precaution any prisoner has ever had and placed in a cell. She knew it was coming, and didn’t resist it. She was condemned to death.
During this time, when news of her leaving and joining the Akatsuki, Sasuke knew training in Konoha might help him defeat Itachi, but to match and defeat Okihi someday would take more power. He left for Orochimaru. Leading everyone to think that he, too, had left for the bad guys.
In her cell, Okihi was visited regularly by Kakashi. He ears and eyes were covered, as was her mouth, so they couldn’t even see or hear each other, but she felt him there. There was a such an uproar on Okihi’s death day, that most of the village seemed to riot. Looking into some old file, Naruto and Sakura were able to find the issued mission of her ANBU captain. Bringing it to Tsunade, Okihi’s extermination was immediately called off and a hunt was on for the captain that has mysteriously disappeared a few days earlier.
(Before you ask, no, Kakashi does not die -_-;’ Not in this world…)
After Sasuke finally returns, and everything’s relatively calm with parts of the Akatsuki defeated. Kakashi and Okihi get married. For a few years in a feeble attempt to get pregnant, Okihi finally consults Tsunade. Apparently, all those years ago, Okihi was harmed greatly by the wound inflicted by Itachi in the Mongekyou world prevented her from ever having kids. After a little bit, Tsunade comes up with a jutsu that’ll fix her problem, but it’s downfall is that it will take most of Okihi’s remaining lifetime away. After a little whiel she agrees to do it. When it’s performed Tsunade warns her she’ll only probably live another seven years or so.
And so, miraculously, Okihi gets pregnant, with twins no doubt. When they’re born they named the boy after Kakashi’s father, Sakumo, and the girl after Okihi’s mother, Mikoto. Sakura and Sasuke became Mikoto’s god parents, and Shizune and Iruka became Sakumo’s godparents. Sakumo proved to be a ninja prodigy, where as Mikoto on the other hand, pledged her life to studying medical jutsu in order to someday save her mom’s life instead of having her die. Okihi ended up living for ten more years then expected. And passed away when Sakumo and Mikoto were seventeen.
Mikoto was unable to save her.
Now, there's more story in where oc's are involved...but this is long enough. ^^'
Sorry for wasting so muhc of your time! Hope you liked it!
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OMG...that was long..but well worth it!
(BONUS POINTS TO THOSE WHO HAVE READ THIS!!! PLEASE KNOW I WILL BE MORE LIKELY TO LOOK AT YOUR ENTRY LONGER IF YOU HAVE A NICE PRETTY STORY LIKE THIS ONE!!!!!)
Great job Magic-San.
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Here is xoMiharoChanxo's really cool entry, she had a really good idea! I'm impressed!!! ^^
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NAME:Shizuka
Things about Shizuka:
She's shy.
She's a bookworm.
She gets stressed out easily.
She's emotional.
She has an older Brother.
She has DID (dissociative identity disorder)
it means she has multiple personalities.
She has 4 of them.
2 are guys.
When she's incredibly stressed out, one "alter" substitutes.
She is 19
Things about Amy:(girl in pigtails)
she likes pigtails.
she loves anything cute~
She loves dogs.
She uses Baby talk.
She likes coloring.
She refers to Shizuka's brother as "Nii Nii"
she's 6.
Things about Angelique:(one with blue-ish hair)
SHe's a diva.
She's french.
She likes being in the spotlight.
She has a lot of different loves.(not at the same time,tho.)
She's into fine wines.
She wears a wig, cuz according to her, red hair is so"passe"
She's 22.
Things about Achille: (in the cool mobsta hat)
He's a mobster.
He has a really cheesy Brooklyn Accent.
He carries a gun around everywhere he goes.
He's Italian.
He likes spaghetti.
He's 20.
Things about Jim: (in the Jersey)
He's a sports fan.
He likes beer.
A LOT OF BEER.
He's a Boston Fan.
He REALLY likes Baseball.
He has a Boston Accent.
He usually takes Shizuka's bro to games.
He's about...27.
