Amazing.
Your writing is on a higher scale than that of Digital.
I love it :3
And thank you for your comment on my story.
I'm hopefully going to get the original finished and submitted, but for now I must get my laptop fixed so I can.
It was intresting, but kinda jumpy. If you revise it editing out most of the Light's in one paragraph with smaller nouns it may seem less jumpy. However it did sound like Light.
firestar99
Title: Otakuite | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
This was very good
Good work!
Madison2294
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 08/27/08 | Reply
*clao*clap*clap*
bravo!! excellent story, very enjoyable!!
EnteiWolf
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 05/24/08 | Reply
... If you remember my Time for Peace story, I've restarted it in one of my worlds, called Peace Series.
You should go check it out :3
SojiRem
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply
Ryuk or Rem should have been there! It was so funney, but at the same time it doesn't sound like a Light thing to do. ^_^
EnteiWolf
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 03/31/08 | Reply
Amazing.
Your writing is on a higher scale than that of Digital.
I love it :3
And thank you for your comment on my story.
I'm hopefully going to get the original finished and submitted, but for now I must get my laptop fixed so I can.
xChox
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 03/15/08 | Reply
It was intresting, but kinda jumpy. If you revise it editing out most of the Light's in one paragraph with smaller nouns it may seem less jumpy. However it did sound like Light.
Sesshomaru22
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/12/08 | Reply
Good story very interesting..