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    Haru 93

    Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 10/03/08 | Reply

    I realllly liked it
    XD

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    DeidaraNarutoClan

    Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 09/13/08 | Reply

    @gaaragirl911:

    Kinda seems that if Light went back to Lawliet's past every time a sweet is eaten, kinda seems a little repeditive, but maybe you could put L hearing a struggle outside before his mother was killed, you know, add a little more

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    gaaragirl911

    Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 09/13/08 | Reply

    @DeidaraNarutoClan:

    Thanks! I kept debating whether or not to make it longer, or continue it with each time Light eats something sweet, he goes back in time to L's life.

    Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.
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    DeidaraNarutoClan

    Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 09/13/08 | Reply

    Aww... This story was sweet. I enjoyed it. Nice job Noelle ^^

    ~Deidara, un

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    SojiRem

    Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 09/13/08 | Reply

    I liked this story! ^_^ G'd job