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    waywardwarrior

    Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 07/14/08 | Reply

    Oh, I like. The apologizing scene was good, I loved the whole tossing the slave out into the sea thing^^ And, ah, the pendant cometh backeth!

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    Mimmi

    Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 03/18/08 | Reply

    At page 3: "He felt sharp point lightly touch his neck, jutting into his skin every time he exhaled." I'm missing an 'a' or something :x

    This is an even better read the second time around and I thought it was brilliant the first time through O.O

    *lavishes you with praise*