yes, almost all of my poems are dreary but they are well made if i do sayso my self. it would really please me if you commented and liked my peoms that i slaved away at. i always insist that my works are perfect. enjoy!

if you had eyes like mine -poem

If you had eyes like mine,
Youwould be able to see me.
If you had eyes like mine,
You would be able to know me.

If you had eyes like mine,
You would know the pain.
If you had eyes like mine,
You would know the hatred and neglect.

If you had eyes like mine,
You would remember the feeling of lonlyness.
If you had eyes like mine,
You would remember the feeling of fear.

If you had eyes like mine,
You would be able to look me straight in the eyes without flinching,
and see my whole life,
And it would be just like yours

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