WELL, JUST THINK FOR A MINUTE. IF SHE USES THE NINJA TOOL SUMMONING, SHE THROWS DOWN WEAPONS AND PICKS THEM UP AGAIN. TO ME IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, BUT I'M NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU OR YOUR OPINION. I'M JUST STATING WHAT I THINK, SO PLEASE DON'T THINK I'M TRYING TO BE MEAN.
I was so sad at the begining, but at the end i was so happy tthat i cheered,and my class looked at me like i was crazy!!! it is written very well and it makes you feel like a member of the team.
shizuka101
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/28/08 | Reply
@midnightblackfox:
WELL, JUST THINK FOR A MINUTE. IF SHE USES THE NINJA TOOL SUMMONING, SHE THROWS DOWN WEAPONS AND PICKS THEM UP AGAIN. TO ME IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, BUT I'M NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU OR YOUR OPINION. I'M JUST STATING WHAT I THINK, SO PLEASE DON'T THINK I'M TRYING TO BE MEAN.
midnightblackfox
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/28/08 | Reply
@shizuka101:
Well Tenten's my favorite character, so I dont think she's stupid.
shizuka101
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/27/08 | Reply
@midnightblackfox:
midnightblackfox
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/27/08 | Reply
@shizuka101:
There's no need to bash the couple.
Akisama
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/25/08 | Reply
I was so sad at the begining, but at the end i was so happy tthat i cheered,and my class looked at me like i was crazy!!! it is written very well and it makes you feel like a member of the team.
shizuka101
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/24/08 | Reply
mewmewpudding
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/24/08 | Reply
Very well written, your writing style really pulled me it.
It was so cute and beautifully done. :D
midnightblackfox
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/23/08 | Reply
Thank you very much!
SaxGirl
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/23/08 | Reply
awwwwww......
how romantic!
I like your story and I think it's well written - good job!