Well, with regards to the oneshot, I did recognize the last vision Asuka had, but I tend to miss a lot when I'm reading. Also, was the ghost Asuka was with his sister? Because that would be cool, but I don't know if I misinterpreted that.
Nice one! Your still reading!! :D *teary eyed* i'm really glad you think so :) I'll keep it up! ^^
(btw, i wonder after reading the oneshot you picked up on something that someone who hasn't read it wouldn't have *scratches chin* ~shrugs~ i tried ^^)
But thankyou again! Comments always make me wonna write more :D
Ok, that was awesome. Yay vampires! ...sorry. Anyway, I still love your writing, it's really easy to picture what's happening. And you are way to good at cliffhanger endings. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
@Rageon:
Wow! Your really good! ^^
Yup! It was :D
It was her who gave him the vision :O - so what's that suggest? :D
Rageon
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
Well, with regards to the oneshot, I did recognize the last vision Asuka had, but I tend to miss a lot when I'm reading. Also, was the ghost Asuka was with his sister? Because that would be cool, but I don't know if I misinterpreted that.
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
@Rageon:
Nice one! Your still reading!! :D *teary eyed* i'm really glad you think so :) I'll keep it up! ^^
(btw, i wonder after reading the oneshot you picked up on something that someone who hasn't read it wouldn't have *scratches chin* ~shrugs~ i tried ^^)
But thankyou again! Comments always make me wonna write more :D
Rageon
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
Ok, that was awesome. Yay vampires! ...sorry. Anyway, I still love your writing, it's really easy to picture what's happening. And you are way to good at cliffhanger endings. I'm looking forward to reading more.