Oh wow! I could kiss you! :D
This is the most feedback i've ever gotten! I'm really glad to hear that you like how i write - i must admit, i'm often worried that no-one understands what i'm on about because of my dislexia.
And don't worry! Now that you've said all that i'll deffinatly keep writing it now! ^^
And thankyou for making the time for reading this and commenting in the first place :)
*starts planning out 11*
Comments make me wonna write more anyway so yeah!
Thanks again!
Ok, sorry my last comments haven't really said much, I was a bit pressed for time.
I'm really getting into this story. It's an interesting premise to start with, and you writing style really makes the characters come alive. Also, you way of describing events is right on, I always can picture what is taking place. You are also really good at foreshadowing and relieving just enough information to keep you readers hooked. I personally think that a horror story with character that are trained assassins with superpowers is a really cool idea for the story and I really hope you continue writing these because I don't think I'll be able to stop reading them.
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 08/29/08 | Reply
Oh wow! I could kiss you! :D
This is the most feedback i've ever gotten! I'm really glad to hear that you like how i write - i must admit, i'm often worried that no-one understands what i'm on about because of my dislexia.
And don't worry! Now that you've said all that i'll deffinatly keep writing it now! ^^
And thankyou for making the time for reading this and commenting in the first place :)
*starts planning out 11*
Comments make me wonna write more anyway so yeah!
Thanks again!
Rageon
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 08/29/08 | Reply
Ok, sorry my last comments haven't really said much, I was a bit pressed for time.
I'm really getting into this story. It's an interesting premise to start with, and you writing style really makes the characters come alive. Also, you way of describing events is right on, I always can picture what is taking place. You are also really good at foreshadowing and relieving just enough information to keep you readers hooked. I personally think that a horror story with character that are trained assassins with superpowers is a really cool idea for the story and I really hope you continue writing these because I don't think I'll be able to stop reading them.